|Reviews for Pregnant Vampire Bella Joins the Army!|
| EclipsedbyJacob chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
I agree with you guys! How did you get so right on the money? Breaking Dawn was unbelievable, but I'm sure you guys can one up it! Good luck!
| The Real Blue Eyed Demon chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
I'm seeing very few people who actually DID like the book. It disgusted me on a several levels. Several of them have burnt there books but it will still continue in my eyes to be a series, just one that ended with Eclipse.
You should still continue this story, there's nothing wrong about being saner than the writer of the actual books.
| midnitesunjedi chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
I loved BD! Im very sad your are not continuing...[
Id like to see Renesmee trick or treat though! ]
| J Plash chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
I think this was probably the only fair way you guys could respond to...it, lol.
Oh, and you cracked me up big time :D
(and hooray for other people who did like it once getting past the weirdness ;D)
| watermelonflavored chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
haha yeah i feel the same way about breaking dawn, it was crazy i thought i was reading a fan fic...but i still loved it i love happy endings get me there no matter how u get there(at least some what believe able)and i'm good :D
by the way, this chapter was hilarious and soo true. i just wish u would continue with your story i wat to read wat bella's puppies would be like.
if stephenie could put out a book like breaking dawn i think you guys could put out a fan fict like this
haha go with the trick or treat idea, my resent story is a jakeX nessie and quilXclaire playdate at the beach
| buggage chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
hahahh mike newton could be a merman. THATS GREAT hahaha hilarious! I honestly didnt lik BD nearly as much as I thought it would. It ws so completely devoid of romance, it was painful! twilight-eclipse had WAY more in the romance department, and they were even MARRIED in this one. sheesh.
| californiaaaa chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
"And so the puppy fell in love with the baby sea monster."
| Pink Erasers chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
NO. I wanted to see vampire Bella in military training camp! ;_;
Unless it wasn't normal human armies you were talking about. xD
I totally agree - Breaking Dawn was good, in my opinion, but completely insane. And rather cliched. Still. I'm a sucker for the cliched happy endings. :P
I look forward to more work from you guys. ;
| siDEADde chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
The first thing I thought when I got to pg 123 in BD was this fanfic. Unlike you guys, I didn't like BD..not any of the three times I read it. Your story was much better...probably because it was -supposed- to be a parody.
Oh the irony.
Keep it up though, how about Nessie in PE at 3 years old, or Jacob trying-to-focus-on-something-besides-his-infant-love in PE.
*Love for the funniest*
| sirenmergirl chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
"Impossible. It can't be.", I thought. Little did I know Meyer would present every cliched plot of fanfiction into breaking dawn. Good greaf. By the time they got to Isla Esme, a mistakenly thought, "ok, it won't get too much cheezier that this." I think I even read some of the exact scenes from her book in other fanfictions. But for some reason (I wonder why), yours kept coming back to my mind again-and again-and again...I think you guys have filched Alice's gift, seeing as somehow,this is the one book where she didn't predict the madness, BEFORE IT HAPPENED!
| love bite chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
Yeah, I liked BD more than I disliked it, but I kept thinking, "Any minute now, I'm going to turn the page and SM will have written 'Just Kidding! This was my homage to crackfic, now here's the real story...'"
I thought several times how astonished I was that there were so many resemblances to Pregnant Bella Joins the Army.
Great minds think alike...or something.
| Insanity's Partner chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
That's exactly what I said. I was thinking about this fanfic towards the end.
I kept thinking that Breaking Dawn was like really literate cliched AU fanfiction.
| AbiBTDotty chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
I thought of this fic as i was reading BD and altough BD was like a crazy fanfic i did enjoy it
I'll look out for more stories from you!
| Tuz Farkinca chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
Aw, I agree, at least a general ending would be nice.
One of my first thoughts when Bella got pregnant was 'Gah, SM just killed the parody Bella-Gets-Pregnants.'
Anyway, I'll miss this story. But I'll look out for Nessie Trick-Or-Treating.
| Angeliss chapter 7 . 8/6/2008
I was waiting to see what you guys thought of BD... And I liked it too, although my thoughts were parallel with yours. I think maybe Stephenie Meyer had too many sleepless nights, and it was definitely different... I did enjoy it, though.
It makes me sad that this fic will be abandoned, though. I will miss it a lot. Is there any way you could tell us how it ends? I know it wasn't particularly planned, but if you had an idea of where it was going... I need to finish! Yeah, I have some weird need-for-closure compulsion going on, even for fics on crack. Sue me. Actually, please don't; I'm a poor college student.