Reviews for A New Player on the Ice
Wolfling21 chapter 7 . 9/25/2010
Very nice cliffhanger
Queen S of Randomness 016 chapter 7 . 9/25/2010
hey!

another awesome chapter! i hope u update soon! - :)
Phoenix07 chapter 6 . 9/20/2010
i love this story please update
Wolfling21 chapter 6 . 7/4/2010
Very nice, can't wait for more. I love how u switch pov at random points My 1 request: more of Duke
everfaraway chapter 6 . 2/17/2010
interesting cant wait 4 more. as always everfaraway
Rose-de-Noire chapter 6 . 2/14/2010
I really like that story.

And I'm happy that the story is continuing!

Greets Rose
Queen S of Randomness 016 chapter 5 . 12/16/2009
hey!

this is an awesome story so far!

i hope u update soon! - :)
Wolfling21 chapter 5 . 10/10/2009
very nice, i like it. Satochi & Drake have the potential to become very interesting characters.
WildKyrs chapter 5 . 10/2/2009
YAY you posted! I love the story! Where is Drake going? Post Soon :-)
WildKyrs chapter 4 . 8/13/2009
I still love where the story is going! Post Soon! i have to know what happenes?
sarah chapter 4 . 7/16/2009
I like the story. No really! Drake turned himself from a street loner to a nice kid, almost I think.

I found several mishaps like word errors and such.

Example: In part 2, When Mallory mentions: "You're right very bad jokes" What does that mean? Is it: You're right, very bad jokes. Or You write very bad jokes.

Be sure to read over it several times and you'll get my meaning.

I'll see more of your work.

Take care
HeartofaBard chapter 4 . 7/14/2009
OMG! Amazing chapter! Sorry it took so long I've been busy between vacations, volunteering, and writing my own fanfcition. Anyway, please please please update soon. I am dying to know what happens next!
brandi chapter 3 . 7/2/2009
nice
King of Monsters chapter 3 . 7/1/2009
Okay, this is pretty interesting. Lets see how you do from here on.
HeartofaBard chapter 3 . 4/18/2009
Awesome story! Please please write more soon! I'm dying to know what happens!
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