|Reviews for A New Player on the Ice|
| Wolfling21 chapter 7 . 9/25/2010
Very nice cliffhanger
| Queen S of Randomness 016 chapter 7 . 9/25/2010
another awesome chapter! i hope u update soon! - :)
| Phoenix07 chapter 6 . 9/20/2010
i love this story please update
| Wolfling21 chapter 6 . 7/4/2010
Very nice, can't wait for more. I love how u switch pov at random points My 1 request: more of Duke
| everfaraway chapter 6 . 2/17/2010
interesting cant wait 4 more. as always everfaraway
| Rose-de-Noire chapter 6 . 2/14/2010
I really like that story.
And I'm happy that the story is continuing!
| Queen S of Randomness 016 chapter 5 . 12/16/2009
this is an awesome story so far!
i hope u update soon! - :)
| Wolfling21 chapter 5 . 10/10/2009
very nice, i like it. Satochi & Drake have the potential to become very interesting characters.
| WildKyrs chapter 5 . 10/2/2009
YAY you posted! I love the story! Where is Drake going? Post Soon :-)
| WildKyrs chapter 4 . 8/13/2009
I still love where the story is going! Post Soon! i have to know what happenes?
| sarah chapter 4 . 7/16/2009
I like the story. No really! Drake turned himself from a street loner to a nice kid, almost I think.
I found several mishaps like word errors and such.
Example: In part 2, When Mallory mentions: "You're right very bad jokes" What does that mean? Is it: You're right, very bad jokes. Or You write very bad jokes.
Be sure to read over it several times and you'll get my meaning.
I'll see more of your work.
| HeartofaBard chapter 4 . 7/14/2009
OMG! Amazing chapter! Sorry it took so long I've been busy between vacations, volunteering, and writing my own fanfcition. Anyway, please please please update soon. I am dying to know what happens next!
| brandi chapter 3 . 7/2/2009
| King of Monsters chapter 3 . 7/1/2009
Okay, this is pretty interesting. Lets see how you do from here on.
| HeartofaBard chapter 3 . 4/18/2009
Awesome story! Please please write more soon! I'm dying to know what happens!