|Reviews for Hale Twins|
| Kim chapter 4 . 2/7/2013
I'll give some constructive criticism. Not very interesting but plenty of room to improve. Did very well in capturing my attention until chapter 3. I suggest you go back to chapter 1&2 and read them so you can bring out the depth from those chapters into further ones.
| Kim chapter 3 . 2/7/2013
Not one of the most exciting chapters but still quite enjoyable. It brings the benefits of being vampire. Overall from a scale from 1-5 I would give a 3 or 2.
| Kim chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Amazing! I have no words I can feel the sibling love and loyalty between Jasper and Rosalie. This is what I think is missing in most stories the emotion but in this chapter the author managed to bring out the core deep love between Rosalie and Jasper. Truly this is riveting.
| Kim chapter 2 . 2/7/2013
Slightly confusing organization... yet full of love and emotion. Really brings out the bond between a brother and sister. This is what good authors can do bring out emotion and bonds between people. Overall I love this! Thumbs up for this chapter.
| Kia Latvina chapter 3 . 12/9/2012
Yeah, this was a great story
Add in some more deductive bits and it would be fab!
| Twilighttttttttt chapter 4 . 8/28/2012
I didn't know what to expect when I first clicked on this but when I started reading I got a little confused but its AMAZING!:D I got so hooked into the story I NEED to know what happens ahaa very good story a bit confusing though, very good writing just don't try and say to much at oncehurry through it but you sound like you'd make a very good author(y)
| cuddyannie chapter 4 . 9/28/2011
Very nice story so far. Please update it very soon
| bananacupcakes chapter 4 . 2/24/2011
please update soon :)
| darkmagic-luvr chapter 4 . 7/26/2010
I know it's been hellishly long since you've updated this, and it's a shame, because I love it. I would be more than ecstatic if you were ever thinking of continuing. I love this relationship you've created between Jasper and Rosalie.
| i belong to major whitlock chapter 4 . 7/4/2010
plz update i am lovin this story
| GoldenAshTree chapter 4 . 7/2/2010
Wow... a whole TWO years since you updated...
Far too long...
PLEASE UPDATE! I WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE!
| Janiriki chapter 4 . 9/4/2009
interesting, Like the rest of the ppl in here, i like it, but last post was 2008. /sigh oh well i suppose we can all imagine something. it WOULD be nice to read your version tho.
| aliceistiny chapter 4 . 8/18/2009
u should wirte more.
| cutelittlemuffinhasaknife chapter 4 . 8/12/2009
Don't tell me you've *sob* given up.
| E-J99 chapter 4 . 7/27/2009
It;s strange but i like it :)