Reviews for a father and a brother
jaxsonkitty chapter 2 . 1/22/2009
I love this! Update soon!
starbuck2008 chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
I liked it please continue,

I love Charlie to death
deletedaccount679786 chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
This is great! You should really think about continuing it! I love how you waited until the end to sort of tell what happened, but didn't say everything- it really builds up the suspense! Also, I like how it isn't from a certain person's POV for the whole time- that gets kind of job! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue!
Van York chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
I think you should definitely keep going!

you have the best Salinger ideas.
jennahp chapter 1 . 3/11/2008

I so miss this show,...and SO wish seasons 3 would come out on dvd...i like how you brought us into the future... )
hug-me chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
a good start! an interesting story line! just one small critisism, check your spelling and grammer once you have written a chapter because there are a few mistakes eg you put lied instead of lay. looking forward to more!