Reviews for Loving You Ain't So Easy
Guest chapter 3 . 5/27/2013
I like it!
ONE aka TEN chapter 3 . 4/26/2009
author. oh author. where are you?
TheWackedOne chapter 3 . 8/8/2008

i order it!
wiltingflowersandpinkribbons chapter 3 . 3/27/2008
very nice. I'm keeping watch on this one
oirishgoddess chapter 3 . 3/24/2008
sometimes i hate jon, i really really do! brilliant idea (another quest...por kel! shes definitely overworked :P) and cant wait to see what happens next. her dream was...scary, to say the least *shudders* well done, though! :)
Mrs. Dom Masbolle chapter 3 . 3/18/2008
oh! please let there be fluff in the next chapter...

like, maybe she is sobbing and hugging her knees to her in a corner, and dom comes and just holds her...and is all like..

i can't live without you, that's why you need to be safe...something like that...and then he kisses her...and she back...

then they admit their feelings, and help each other cope...

Mrs. Dom Masbolle chapter 2 . 3/18/2008
aw! he likes her too!
Mrs. Dom Masbolle chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
very sweet, i like that she grabbed neal, because he is important to her too...
Odd.Aly chapter 3 . 3/18/2008
no you killed Loey! It was a good chapter though
The Beetle chapter 3 . 3/18/2008
Oh no! Loesia, that was brilliant!

I love this story, you have all of the characters just right and I love the secret relationship that you have going on between Kel and Dom (although if Neal has anything to do with it it probably wont be much of a secret )

I can't wait for more,

Heather the Writer chapter 3 . 3/17/2008
I like it! I like the changes you made, I like the things you kep the same... oh dear, I'm rambling.

I think I was a bit of a failure in being a Beta... you did fine on your own!
xxTunstall Chickxx chapter 3 . 3/17/2008
ow, poor Kel that blow must've hurt. Update soon!

Keep writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx
Lady Knight Jocelyn chapter 3 . 3/17/2008
It is official. I am in love with your story.

Everything about it is brilliant! Your writing style, the plot, how you kept the characters in character! You have a knack for writing!

I really am intrigued on where this is going-you have me hooked! I want to know what Kel is going to do! Poor Kel! What she must be going through! And I want to know what Dom is going to say to her.

And the scene: “Yes. And there will be no heroics from you Mindelan.” Lord Wyldon stated sternly. He gave Kel a look that could peel paint off the wall. Kel just stared him back in the eye. Dom watched this staring contest, amused. Lord Wyldon was the first to look away." -that scene made me laugh so hard, because I actually could see it happening!

BRAVO! Fantastic job! Keep up the amazing work!

My only complaint-to short of a chapter! I want to find out what happens!

Heather the Writer chapter 2 . 3/11/2008
Looking forward to the next chapter! My one comment is that you use the same words over sometimes... but I think I only spotted that once or twice. I can't really think of any constructive criticism... sorry, I fail!

So... I'm excited to see what you do for the wedding! I'm curious to see who shows up.
Odd.Aly chapter 2 . 3/8/2008
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