|Reviews for Incredible Hulk: Last night, I saved a DJ's life|
| Mrs.Phineas Bogg chapter 4 . 7/7/2012
Hello Guest reviewer, since Fanfic changed format it's harder for me to reply to you so I hope you read this. Thanks so much for your kind and encouraging reviews. I'm not a professional writer but it's my dream to be one and I take my writing very seriously, (but it's so fun!) I read up on all the 'How-to' books I can about writing and I continually edit my stories to make them better, more grammatically correct, etc. I adore the Incredible Hulk series from the seventies so I loved writing this story. I have another one I left on the backburner years ago and hope to post it on my new FF penname one day if I can finish it.
I checked under Yahoo Asks but I did not find a question with that title. There is one that was asked 2 years ago and resolved, with the title- "Any tips and comments on my writing? Good and bad comments welcome, although bad may not be well received!"
Is that you? If so, I will answer.
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/7/2012
Hey that was awesome, could you give me some superhero story writing tips, i posted a question on yahoo answers it's called: need tips for a superhero story...
if you could i would be very grateful.
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/7/2012
are you an author or something? that was amazing, it was short, but you could gather all you fanfics into one book and make a gazilion dollars, i know i would buy a copy!
p.s. thank you for creating such an entertaining story
| stacynn chapter 6 . 5/17/2011
ok just have to say - LOVED THIS!
I completely agree that the Hulk is a superhero (again, something the movie franchise got soooo terribly wrong!) Loved the ending and so glad that ERic and Becky made it ok in New York! Nicely done!
| stacynn chapter 4 . 5/17/2011
oh man, it's never a good idea to spray David in the eyes with industrial cleaner... :P
Loved the action in this chapter! i also like how Eric and rebecca were 'in' on the transformation and I sure hope Eric learned his lesson here with drugs!
| stacynn chapter 2 . 5/17/2011
Love your descriptions of the metamorphosis - what is going on in David's head, etc. Loved how tender the Hulk was with eric and Rebecca. Your style of writing really makes these stories very 'vivid'
| stacynn chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Ok, another EXTREMELY realistic and well-written story that could easily have 'happened' on the show. Love your little romance of supporting characters, nice touch! And boy, I bet someone is going to make David angry soon. And we all know how that goes.
| SuperSonic183 chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
i love this story i add you and your story to my favorites
| Jake Crepeau chapter 6 . 1/3/2009
Girl, half the fun in reading your stories is finding the references to JEH in there! Which came first, this story or that poster you Photoshopped on your website with his face in The Music Man? Eric Jonas...Jumpin' Jack...WHEX? Ye GODS! Okay, maybe I'm stretching it a bit picking up on the red-and-white Nikes, but "Brass compass transported me through time and space from New York City"? Then there's the reference to becoming a model, and maybe going into science, but he changed his mind...And then, to cap it all off, you ended it in New York in *1982*!
Seriously, though, I loved this story. You really stay true to the characters so incredibly well. I especially liked where the Hulk looks puzzled at his wet fingers after he wipes his eyes. (Vague memory of maybe seeing a similar scene in the series?)
| VoyagersFan chapter 6 . 6/6/2008
Never liked Jack McGee, even in the series. Still don't like him now. That bouncer should watch out, he could find himself with something mean and green standing in front of him. Great description of the fight scene. Very accurate and detailed. Whew! That was close... Sorry guys, there will be no raping and pillaging today. I knew it, I just knew it...Food...AGAIN!
Wonderful story, extremely well told!
| VoyagersFan chapter 5 . 6/6/2008
Ok, we've come down off our high and what's next on our agenda... FOOD! I just knew it was coming...LOL! Your description of Rebecca's out of control state upon waking up was excellent. I could picture that scene very clearly in my mind. Burritos and Beer in a pinto...umm...can we say...COZY. Oh my another reference. Eric's going to NYC to try his hand at acting. OMG and you just had to end this chapter with a cliff hanger. Good work!
| VoyagersFan chapter 4 . 6/6/2008
Oh you just had to put that reference to Roberta Flack in this chapter. Oh, that song brings back memories. Here we go again, bring on the Brownies. And more subtle references to JEH... Flinging the records on the floor. LOL! A word to the wise, don't get high on angel dust, otherwise the green-eyed monster in your imagination may come to life right before your eyes.
| snacgirl chapter 6 . 4/18/2008
What can I say? This is one of the absolute best fanfics I've ever read. Your characterizations are spot on, the breaks are in all the right places, and (this one is a particular pet peeve of mine) your grammar and punctuation are impecable! It is a JOY to read something so well thought out and so nicely put together.
The ONLY things missing are a mention of David's ever-present duffle bag and the utterance of his signature goodbye, "Take care of yourselves, my friends."
All in all, a brilliant effort! I sincerely hope you continue writing TIH stories.
| snacgirl chapter 5 . 4/18/2008
Yay! I was wondering when/if ol' Jack was gonna show up. You've got him down, too.
And I really liked this line:
...I’m a lot stronger than I may look, Eric.
| snacgirl chapter 4 . 4/18/2008
" “I will do so, with honor!” He bowed. "
Oh, and the rest of this chapter isn't half bad either!