|Reviews for Behind Blue Eyes|
| Jack104 chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
SCREW THEM! hetersexual relationships are the best! and i also happen to be a big fan of this pairing!
good job kid.
| ForestGuardian311 chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Well, it's not bad. Trust me, I would rather read "M" rated fics with heterosexual couples than with homosexual couples. And for making this SatoRisa and not SatoDai, I do thank you.
However, one thing I do find awkward, even though the whole thing was a dream - they're still in middle school (14, I believe). For them to be having intercourse that young...(Shrugs) It doesn't sit well with me.
But great job though!
| Elly3981 chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
I'm new to DN Angel and I love romance. I think you write beautifully; your story was hot, romantic, and sexy. I can't find anything not to like except that it was only a dream! Satoshi strikes me as a very interesting character and I think that he and Risa would be a good couple as the ending of the anime hints. I find his relationship with Daisuke kind of strange, almost sexual even though both of them are straight. I've posted several hetrosexual couple fics on AFF, I think your story would do well there too. Maybe you should make a sequel where they get together for real :)
| KikoTakahashi chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
well it was writen well i felt sorry for Satoshi at the end
| AwesomeAnimeFreak247 chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Awesome story!SatoRisa fans should read 's kind of funny at the on it!5 stars 5/5.
| SnowxCruellyxHeartbroken chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
This was a pretty good story. Kinda sad at the end. But good none the less. So kuddo's for you!
| drgn grl chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
I like it! Not enough people do these kinds of pairings. I applaud you for doing it and sticking out. I really don't think any of them are gay, just obsessed, so, thanks for writing this lemon!
| ShuuyaLover chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
| Crisalide chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
You should be proud of all your works, hun~
I'm a bit bothered by this fic. True, you have definite skill in grammar and sentence structure. Though, don't these kids have only fourteen years of age? Isn't that a bit young for sex? But then again, it is only a dream coming from a fourteen year old male, so I guess it could be plausible.
Overall, it's a good shot. Though, I believe you could revise a few bits and pieces here and there. To make it flow smoother.
I really hope you do not take this as a flame, but as constructive criticism.
I think vol.3 is a bit too soon for "I love you"
| smurf87 chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
This one-shot was really amazing! I am going to look at some more stuff you have written but first...i agree that the rating should be M for Mature. I am not trying to bother you or anything but it would be sad if the story got deleted because of a miss rating. IT WAS HONESTLY A GREAT FIC! POOR SATOSHI!
| mayumi-chan chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
isn't this supposed to be a rated m since it's so explict? anyway, good fic.
| khakiXthistle chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
hurts man .,
poor sato .. tsk tsk tsk ..!
breaking up is having the coldest nightmare after having the best dream ..
nice nice ..
| Galinda01 chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
:( Meh! Poor, poor Satoshi!
I absolutely adore this couple! I feel sad for him, but I did like this fic. It was really good.