An interesting story, can't wait for more, espechialy liked the ending to this chapter.

Though what is this a crossover with, and is Bruenor really going to just take 2 others with him, surely if he's a King and is worried about the fireball, wouldnt he take some bodyguards with him.

Anyways I think I'le try a few more of your fics now.

Well...it's different! That's not a bad thing because, actually, I like your ending better with Johnson and Keyes alive and together with Arbie and the Chief. Dwarves, humans, goblins-this sounds like LOTR in space...