|Reviews for The Rules Are The Same|
| hamster1231 chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
I like names Kyle and Derek Reet and Sarah,John and 've defo been watching to much and Derek Reese,Sarah and John Connor.
| beth9874 chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
this is really good
| JJ Rust chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
Not a bad story. The most impactful part was Jake's reaction to seeing the body of the 12-year-old girl. Very vivid pointing out the hole in her head and Jake throwing up.
A couple things to point out. These guys probably wouldn't use an M1 rifle. Those things were phased out of the U.S. Army back in the 1960s. Ravenwood would probably be packing M4s or MP5s. Also one grammatical mistake with "blocked at out."
Flashbacks can be tricky things, but it worked the way you interspersed them with Jake's dialogue.
Keep on writing.