|Reviews for Him and His King|
| Rize Shirosaki chapter 1 . 5/21
That was hot. Very hot.
I like it how you describe sex as if it was another battle of theirs.
| MidnightEden234 chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
I like your writing style, very intriguing!
| lotus-bugxm9 chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Cool :) HichiIchi ftw
| ValentineRevenge chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
"You little shit, stop waterin' me like I'm a damn flower."
I absolutely love that line. It makes me think of a Shiro-Flower. Wonder what it'll be like if they actually had those kinds of flowers...
Walk out the door, and the garden starts yelling and cursing at you...
Anyways, while this was from Shiro's viewpoint and mostly in his one-liner thoughts, it provided a very interesting story with minimal to no confusion and plot-holes. Have not seen very many of these, and even fewer which were well written. To this, I bid you good job.
| WereBunny87 chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
I love the way you write! Good job! This couple always makes me grin! In a leering sort of way *snerk* i loved it!
| void-nogitsune chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Wow, this is very well written! First fanfic I've read between Ichigo and his dark side, and lucky it was! I loved the way you played things out, and how you emphasized some of the phrases. I love stories like this, a bit mysterious, but beautiful none the less(: Thank you for writing this! I'll probably end up reading this over and over again. Writing like this inspires me, because I get hooked with the way it's written (if that makes any sense at all) xD
Anyways, thanks again, and good job! :P
| TealEyedBeing chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
whoo~! xD brief Rukia bashing. i like her most of the time too, but sometimes she does get on my last nerves so she does need a bashing occasionally. xD anyways, back to the point, xD lime turned lemon. lolz hotness and xD that it was more of a fight than an actual act of sex. xDD that was hilariously hot. xDD
| Gabbi-Da-Fangirl-XD chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
It was kinda confusin at first and it's kool how you wrote it that way! This is my review so idk wat to say...Other than that it was cool :)
| BonneNuit chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
Love this! :)
| SpaceCowboi chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
i caught the changes!
le gasp! could this be smut with underlining morals and emotion?
very well done, keep up the good work!
| KivaEmber chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
'Gimmie a tree too!'
Loved that line. Ah, what am I saying? I loved all of it! Good job!
| Senbonzakura chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
Hohoho...things went from wet to bloody to dry(hot and tight too! ;D) and wet(and white) then dry again!
WE~~ Good job on your first Bleach fanfic :3
It was very we-..ahem WELL done .
Hopefully more evil plot bunnies hit you! Bwahahahah!