loving the story so far!

good beginning!..i am so totally looking forward to this!..on to the next chapter..

I am really really enjoying your writing! You capture their light hearted romantic side so well! I can't believe how fast it is going - before I know it, I will be done - thank you for writing this!

This is a fantastic, sweet fic however I have a few suggestions for you. oh and chapter 3 had me crying.

“Relax Bella, Esme called Carlisle to request that you spent the night with Alice,” Edward grinned. I knew fair well I wouldnve, world's" / ’t be spending the night with Alice. She had already escaped the car.

you need to review this sentence.

Carlisle should, i think, be Charlie.

The sentence "I knew fair well I wouldnve, world's" / ’t be spending the night with Alice" does not make sense.

There were actually quite a bit more for the mistakes so I would suggest a beta or at least go over it a little more. I might not have mentioned it but for the fact that some mistakes disrupt the fic and make it slightly confusing(such as the above sentence).

Great job so far, otherwise.

That was hot!

OMG! R u an awesome writer or what? Simply loved it. Meyer cudn't have done it better... This was so beautiful and cute... :)

This was amazing. Everything was so passionate and breathtaking. Are you sure you're only 13? You are a truly talented writer. Reason One reminded me of the song "Fearless" by Taylor Swift. I guess because of the standing in a parking lot in the pouring rain. Reason Two reminded me of another Taylor Swift song "Our Song" because Edward put roses all over Bella's bedroom. The ending was so beautiful. I got all teary-eyed AND I blushed right along with Bella, which is saying something because I NEVER blush! Great job!

Amazing, this was an extremely funny and romantic fan fic.

Especially some the the thirteen reasons, they were so sweet!

Please write more, as I'm lloking forward to what you will wirte next. Keep it up!

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This story is extraodinary. I read it in one and a half days. It is one of the stories that i absolutely have to continue to read when I start. It's really a beautiful idea for a story. Thirteenth reasons why I love you. I'm going to put this on my favourite stories' list. Very good. Keep up the good work!

this is such a sweet

story well im off

to read the squeal

bubi

xoxo

omg this is so amazing i mean some people dont like edward and bella fluff but this was uttrrly amazing :') happy tears

That was really sweet!

Your story is totally amazing! I am French, live in Paris and eat baguette at breakfast like everyone, and I love doing... oh, you are not here to listen to me telling my life? Too bad. So, I was saying that I enjoyed your story a lot. I will try, too, to say it in thirteen reasons. I know it is stupid, but I just love to put little numbers everywhere. (But WHY am I writing that?)

1. I was surprised of having a story like "Bella and Edward are happy and live together with their friends the Take Care Bears" (in Frain French, you say Bisounours, and I love the spelling of that. Bisounours.)

2. Bella and Edward are always cute and romantic but never HEAVILY cute and HEAVILY romantic. It is really pleasant to read someone who doesn't fall into the trap of "too much", as we say in France.

3. You write very well, reading you is a real pleasure. Thaks a lot.

4. I have learnt a few words in English reading you (like crutch), so it improved my talking and I have to thank you for that.

5. You had the courage to write a long story. On top of that, this one stays interesting from the beginning to the end, I mean that when you start you already know what are the issues and what is the goal. Many authors have too much ideas and follow at the rhythm of their inspiration, but sometimes I find that the end has really nothing to do with the beginnging.

6. I am now writing a fanfic myself about Angela Weber changing her vision of the world, becoming like a brat and then making everyone's life impossible or turning other people to brats like her, and your story gave me the moving of writing again. I am NOT saying that I inspired on you (I would never do a such thing, that revulses me!) but that your story gave me a blow to push me writing again.

7. I smiled sometimes when I saw fiancé. For a man, you write fiancé, for a woman you say fiancée. This difference is really important! When I read somthing like "Edward was my fiancée" I couldn't help but thinking "Sorry, but is Ed' gay?"

8. You kepts characters like they are, you respected Meyer's ideas without staying stuck to her text and her writing. That's really great.

9. I was amazed when I saw you published the story in only 2 months. How did you manage to do it? You're like Superman, aren't you? Err... please, please, tell me you don't wear blue thights with a red brief? (I am exhausted, forgive me if you can).

10. I am almost to 13. You must be gifted. You are only 14 (13 when you wrote), and you wrote something so good? What are your secret reciepes? Do you spend all your days in reading litterature books? I cannot comprehend. A French teacher told me I had "writing gifts" (French is not a foreign language to me!), my English teacher said that my reflexion about the war was really deep and almost made her weep (making my English teacher WEEPING, do you realize?), my Spanish teacher that I would have been a very good Littéraire (in France students are separated in 3 classes: Littéraire, Economique et sociale et Scientifique. I'm a Scientific), but when I take back my redactions from when I was 13, I am almost ashamed!

11. I love these numbers, and you gave me a motive to use 13.

12. Seing that the French traduction is not complete, I even wondered if I might do it... But I'm too busy. Too bad.

13. Because I'm just going to do a HUGE plagiarism of Edward (and some way, you), saying that I LOVE your story.

Hope you like my review ;)

I'll read the sequel when I have time (what may happen when I have passed my baccalauréat... in July?) and also at day (it's 00.34 AM in Paris and I spent 30 minutes writing this review! I am MAD!)

So, goodbye. I'll pray so that you won't die of oldness (can we say it like that?) before finishing to read me.

I love it so far I thout it was from Stephanie Meyer, it's so good keep on writing more to i. It rocks!