|Reviews for Smoke|
| TEAM DERRICK chapter 7 . 7/9/2009
this is a great fanfic
| Redfox24 chapter 2 . 6/23/2008
Good work! Your writing style is very good. The harsh life fits in with Akira's atmosphere very well. It's also good how you portray the characters' apathy towards the revolution, no doubt that is what most people will feel in such a situation.