Reviews for Twice Shy :: Story Two
kawaiihinahime08 chapter 15 . 9/14/2023
sadly this story was long forgotten I came straight here after reading the prequel and I could say this was really amazing
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn chapter 15 . 10/24/2021
Oh shucks... I hope this isn't abandoned! I'd love to read more!
I'm particularly curious how Naruto's sealing training will go, the jounin exams, the development of NH's relationship and everything else.
I know that the story is incomplete when I started reading it but I just couldn't help it. It's so good! I just hope it gets continued eventually though.

Suggestion about the story rating, even if you're not planning to write anything explicit so far, I think it's much safer to bump this to an M rating considering some of the mildly sexual themes in this story. But it's still up to you if you want to change the rating or not.

Again, I sure do hope this will eventually be continued because it's a really good story and I enjoyed the overall development and progression of this fic.

Wonderful job you have done for this story!
Mejial chapter 15 . 10/2/2021
I'm going to be straight, this is one of the best takes on a Naruto story even better as a Naruhina that was built and sustained properly. This is amazing work that you've done, seemlessly blending into the story of another that sadly lost their spark. I've been waiting for 6 years, please if your not going to continue make it known. If you are, give us what little hope can be given
Margaritasc chapter 2 . 7/18/2020
Why you make me cry TT
Guest chapter 15 . 5/7/2020
holy shit.. i’m like 9 years late, i hope you return and finish this story, it’s really fuckin amazing, it’s probably impossible though..
LordHatredX chapter 15 . 8/11/2019
good story to bad its been long time since update

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falsepermanence chapter 15 . 4/29/2019
i knew this wasn't finished and yet...i still did this to myself. oh the pain of it all
ensanesane chapter 1 . 12/20/2018
This is a great continuation of a great story. I know it probably won't be completed but even the bit more we got was worth it completely. Hope you're well.
DarkRodent44 chapter 1 . 12/16/2018
why do the best ones never finish?
chelsewy 131 chapter 10 . 9/22/2018
Type your review are born in january
Guest chapter 15 . 3/20/2018
Will you PLEASE continue this story. It has been my favorite for many years and I need to know how it ends.
Fumes43 chapter 15 . 2/5/2018
I wish you'd finish this story it's simply pure gold
Guest chapter 15 . 1/9/2018
Pleasseeeeeeee make moreeeeeee
jetrois chapter 15 . 12/6/2017
Overall I’m really digging the story. Makes sense I just go with the flow and try to enjoy the story as such I found this to be a very good match to the original writer style I’m just wondering when your gonna update I’m quite pleased with this story and hope you continue it to the finish line.
Athens Law chapter 15 . 11/25/2017
this story is really good. can barely tell the difference between your writing style and the original's (no offence, its a good thing - it doesn't change the story's flow). plz update soon. ty. sincerely, taka
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