Reviews for Twice Shy :: Story Two |
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![]() ![]() ![]() sadly this story was long forgotten I came straight here after reading the prequel and I could say this was really amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shucks... I hope this isn't abandoned! I'd love to read more! I'm particularly curious how Naruto's sealing training will go, the jounin exams, the development of NH's relationship and everything else. I know that the story is incomplete when I started reading it but I just couldn't help it. It's so good! I just hope it gets continued eventually though. Suggestion about the story rating, even if you're not planning to write anything explicit so far, I think it's much safer to bump this to an M rating considering some of the mildly sexual themes in this story. But it's still up to you if you want to change the rating or not. Again, I sure do hope this will eventually be continued because it's a really good story and I enjoyed the overall development and progression of this fic. Wonderful job you have done for this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm going to be straight, this is one of the best takes on a Naruto story even better as a Naruhina that was built and sustained properly. This is amazing work that you've done, seemlessly blending into the story of another that sadly lost their spark. I've been waiting for 6 years, please if your not going to continue make it known. If you are, give us what little hope can be given |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why you make me cry TT |
![]() ![]() holy shit.. i’m like 9 years late, i hope you return and finish this story, it’s really fuckin amazing, it’s probably impossible though.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story to bad its been long time since update ! ! ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i knew this wasn't finished and yet...i still did this to myself. oh the pain of it all |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great continuation of a great story. I know it probably won't be completed but even the bit more we got was worth it completely. Hope you're well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() why do the best ones never finish? |
![]() ![]() Type your review are born in january |
![]() ![]() Will you PLEASE continue this story. It has been my favorite for many years and I need to know how it ends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish you'd finish this story it's simply pure gold |
![]() ![]() Pleasseeeeeeee make moreeeeeee |
![]() ![]() ![]() Overall I’m really digging the story. Makes sense I just go with the flow and try to enjoy the story as such I found this to be a very good match to the original writer style I’m just wondering when your gonna update I’m quite pleased with this story and hope you continue it to the finish line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is really good. can barely tell the difference between your writing style and the original's (no offence, its a good thing - it doesn't change the story's flow). plz update soon. ty. sincerely, taka |