Reviews for Free Will and Fate
CCBottle chapter 45 . 1/29/2015
"I didn't want to have to choose between the two of you." She let out a sob when Harry squeezed her hand. "I'm sorry because if you had asked, I'm not sure which one of you I would have chosen."

Great story but sorry, Lily really is a shitty mom. Everyone knew Snape hated Harry. He even manhandled his stepson in front of the entire school. How could Lily always take Snape's side over her own son's when everyone clearly sees what the relationship is like? But even if that weren't all true she'd still be a shitty mom in general for picking him over her own son.
HP.HG. fan forever chapter 40 . 5/26/2014
I am hoping that when he goes back, he takes the chance and talks to Hermione about her feelings. Maybe his time with this Hermione and his talk about Cho will open his eyes just a little.
The Ghostly Minion chapter 46 . 3/3/2014
There are of course many ends to be explored and maybe resolved.

I will begin the next story. Thank you again for a gorgeous story

D. Page Robin
The Ghostly Minion chapter 37 . 3/3/2014
Another thought provoking chapter. I think that there is something that neither Harry or Hermione have figured out as of yet.

Both Harrys love her. We already know that. Ambulatory Harry simply knows but doesn't figure out yet why he should say the words. This might help.

If either live but the other dies, the survivor needs Hermione and her love. To recover, to grow to be ready for what is still to come.

If both live and merge, amalgamate into a single Harry, he/they need her even more, and for the same reasons.

Should both live and there are two Harry's, the three of them will have to live in some sort of polyandrous relationship. Each Harry will need her even more than one would have. Hermione has enough love for Harrys two and then some.

Finally, should neither Harry live, I think Hermione would soon join them in the next great adventure. She can no more live with them than they without her.

I can say that I've only read through its chapter and have not looked ahead. So if I've worked out some of the future development, then I claim a Gold Star from petty cash!

D. Page Robin
The Ghostly Minion chapter 30 . 3/2/2014
Well, so Lavender is Neville's SO. They make a good couple. Of course Harry and Hermione will have to tell them at some point. I look forward to that. I look forward to Lily learning too.

Why do I fear this story ends with Lily' death? The poor kid has had enough in his life and so much more is to come, I would hate to think he will lose that small bit of grace too.

D. Page Robin
The Ghostly Minion chapter 26 . 3/1/2014
Reading this is exhilarating, terrifying, heartbreaking. I want to be able to step into the story and help them win through.

You do a beautiful job. I am reading five other stories too at this time. One chapter in a rotation. I am always looking forward to this story, last in line.

D. Page Robin
The Ghostly Minion chapter 24 . 3/1/2014
There is no question in my mind that Harry is already in love with Hermione, every bit as much as she with him.

The difference is his sense of duty and the fact that this Hermione has never had to deal with the things her counterpart did.

D. Page Robin
The Ghostly Minion chapter 18 . 3/1/2014
This is a great chapter Sara. The intensity is fantastic. It also leaves me a trifle confused.

Are we to conclude that Hermione and Harry-Prime have been sexually active? Or are we to suppose that Hermione, having realized that Harry-1 is truly the same as the boy she loves wants to make love before it is too late?

I can argue it either way, but I'm lacking the data to decide one way or the other. Or, have I missed clues you have put in the story?

D. Page Robin
The Ghostly Minion chapter 17 . 3/1/2014
Sara, I ran across you and your stories yesterday and I'm so glad I did.

I have a real fondness for time travel stories, and this is easily among the best I've read, thus far.

You have put much thought into the ramifications of time travel. This chapter is a great example. Harry only wanted to save his parents and Neville's too. But look, his best friend love him, his worst enemies are (or profess to be) his friends. He truly is in a world where very little makes sense.

This chapter is case in point. Clearly, an unintended result is that there is a pure blood backlash against half bloods and muggle-born.

Why else would tanks be using a pure blood name instead of her own? I am certain as well that she has never met Lupin, or if she has, only sees him as a a feared monster. Kind of sad to think about.

You are already a favorite author, and I see Laotian of happy hours reading you work. Thank you.

D. Page Robin
Reva chapter 46 . 1/4/2014
bpvreader chapter 46 . 12/9/2013
Had a lot of fun reading, thanks for sharing your tale. Hope you continue to produce fun to read stories.
FreelanceBum chapter 43 . 11/23/2013
Tonksie :'(
Random number generator chapter 7 . 7/25/2013
killed? Why?
Random number generator chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
"Jzmes" should be "James", "jump ." should be "jump."
MissNikita chapter 38 . 7/19/2013
No matter how much I love this story, Hermione is getting/being very obnoxious
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