Reviews for Free Will and Fate
MissNikita chapter 38 . 7/19/2013
No matter how much I love this story, Hermione is getting/being very obnoxious
Jonuts chapter 32 . 5/8/2013
Ah, can always count on Harry to be both retarded AND a hypocrite. So whiny and angsty because he's kept in the dark and fed shit, so instead of doing the right and sensible thing of informing Neville about relevant facts he REALLY needs to know, he keeps him in the dark and feeds him shit.
Jonuts chapter 24 . 5/8/2013
I don't get it. Why is Harry going to die? His mere existence is a paradox. Whatever happens to the other Harry is irrelevant.
Jonuts chapter 18 . 5/7/2013
I hate to say it, but whatever good things happen to Harry are wasted on the ungrateful little shit...
Jonuts chapter 15 . 5/7/2013
For the record, the alternate ending was better :p
Jonuts chapter 12 . 5/7/2013
So...if Harry is dying of the same unknown curse that killed his father, under what logic is the chance of the killer being the same person "Staggeringly small"? Not exactly a common cause of death...
Romantic chapter 2 . 8/14/2012
Um… Good twist!
HideSeekKeep chapter 13 . 7/11/2012
I just came upon this story and haven't been able to leave my laptop. Your premise is fascinating and your writing is gorgeous. The last paragraph in this chapter (Chapter 13) particularly moved me.

Now to continue reading...
LucidRush chapter 46 . 7/10/2012
A work of art, one of the best stories I've read on this site. I'm off to read the sequel.
Covante chapter 46 . 4/14/2012
A great story, I'll be reading the sequel soon. Thank you for posting.
akasanta chapter 16 . 3/21/2012
I'm not big on reviewing individual chapters when starting a story with lots of them usually. Just wanted to tell you that I'm really enjoying this one. I've lost track of the number of Harry Potter fanfiction stories I've read. This one is, to me, the most original one involving time travel I've read. Thank you for writing it. :D
Witherwings01 chapter 45 . 3/2/2012
Well that's gonna annoy me if I don't get your reviews to an even number. 400!
Witherwings01 chapter 46 . 3/2/2012
Wow! I tore through those final few chapters - gripping stuff. I'm so pleased I came to party late - now I don't have to wait for the sequel to get some answers about the consequences Dumbledore spoke of (though I think I can guess) or the fate of the other Harry - I'm sad for him.

Overall, a great read. Thanks.
Witherwings01 chapter 44 . 3/2/2012
Yep, I think that's about the only way you could have Harry instigate plan B without turning him into a heartless murderer. Nicely done.
Witherwings01 chapter 43 . 3/2/2012
TONKS!
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