|Reviews for Free Will and Fate|
| Robbie the Phoenix chapter 14 . 10/1/2011
Okay, I was planning on read the entire story before I reviewed, but I had to say this: I love your portrayal of Bellatrix. She's always been one of my favourite characters, and for some reason I really enjoy the idea that she was able to weasel her way into a teaching position at Hogwarts.
And the rumours about what she does with some of the more handsome male students? Classic Bella! Like I said, I really love this portrayal. And she's all the more frightening because she hasn't been driven mad by her time spent in Azkaban.
| Unknown2you chapter 46 . 8/16/2011
been reading since midnight its now 5 am, has some technical difficulties with harrypotterfanfiction so i came over here,
Well Worth it, thank you for your awsome story! 3 3
| Drifter950 chapter 46 . 7/6/2011
I don't think that time traveling Harry gets it. It's not the first person that gets eliminated. It's the secondary/copy/clone that is sacrificed. And Dumbledore already has it planned.
Harry(T) (T traveler) has been told there is going to be consequences for killing Snape. So sorry, but the Geezergamot does not know about all the circumstances. So Harry(T) will be charged with the murder of Snape ... unless ... Remember that plan back when about Harry(T) going back, taking the note, and go back to the way it was, and make a new future from there.
Member all that Harry(T) told Hermione bout Dumbledore's plans to use Harry(T)/Neville to be a martyr for the cause. Dumbledore can't allow that to get bruited about. That's a real political career killer, that is! So Harry(T) gets persuaded to go back (maybe with a few implanted commands). Two or three oblat ... obli ... memory charms. Um, make the 6 or 7. Every things back under his thumb, and he's comfortable again.
And there is the sequel. Anyone want to bet I am not even close.
(Snort) Thanks for darn good story. I look forward to seeing what your sequel really is.
May the MUSE always be with you!
| Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 6/25/2011
Things have really changed.
| Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
Ack! Excellent idea for a story!
| GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 46 . 4/8/2011
Excellent, but complex, story. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel.
| GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 38 . 4/8/2011
I'm having a hard time imagining that the head of any government (Dumbledore) would even consider personally administered justice rather than using the powers of government that he is sworn to uphold.
I'm also having a bit of difficulty with the idea that just any Harry will do for Hermione, and she feels she can just take up in their love life where she left off with very little concern for where this Harry is in their relationship. I know she's always been pushy and insensitive, but even so, this seems somehow "wrong" for her.
| GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 18 . 4/7/2011
It seems odd to me that Hermione would want to seduce what from her perspective is a Harry clone instead of agonizing over her true love Harry lying in a private ward of St. Mungo's. Frankly, Hermione is at her best when she is at the bedside of a recovering Harry, or in the library researching a counter for whatever curse is afflicting him. It is quite out of character for her to not be demanding access to his room and reports from everyone who has examined or treated him. Admittedly they don't want to arouse suspicion by doing anything unusual, but Hermione is very good at coming up with plausible cover stories.
| GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 11 . 4/7/2011
This back-story leaves a large plot hole, but it's no worse than any of the many that JKR gave us in the original series: According to this story, none of the clever, otherwise observant, and most likely suspicious witches and wizards present in 1981, including James Potter, Sirius Black, Lily Potter, and Albus Dumbledore, noticed that the anonymous note that Severus Snape claimed to have written was not in his own hand. If this note is "the parchment" that new Harry was trying to get his hands on, then the only suspicious one is new Harry.
| GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 6 . 4/7/2011
This is an intriguing story. It gets more interesting with every new character that is introduced. I hope there is a well-justified back-story for how and why these people ended up in different roles as a result of James and Lily surviving Peter's betrayal. I hope it's not just an arbitrary AU.
I notice that even in this new reality, Hermione seems compulsed to have a stormy relationship with whoever her current love interest is. Perhaps the girl should learn to cut her friends a bit more slack.
| venit amor eruat chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
This is just simply amazing. I'm on the first chapter and entranced. I honestly love this and the story plot. I can't really think of any words which can explain what I mean. This is just amazing.
| H Harmon chapter 46 . 1/7/2011
Bravo! I kiked this fic very much, and I have nothing to add to my last review. Well, I off to read the sequel. Ta ta
| H Harmon chapter 18 . 1/6/2011
Good Fic. I like your writing; I don’t usually care for time travel fics but this one works. However, I am tired of Harry, and most of the time Hermione, being displayed as emotional idiots. Where it is true that Harry has no idea what love is, he is smart enough to see it when pointed out to him. Hermione on the other hand doesn’t feel worthy of Harry’s love and is resigned to settle.
Next, JKR had written books 1-4 as a love story between Harry and Hermione, however unintentional it was. I don’t think that JKR meant it to be that way and tried to get back to where she originally planned the relationships to be starting with book #5, which, I have always disagreed with.
Finally, you, and most others, keep saying that Ron is Harry’s best friend when in fact the only person that Harry tells everything to is Hermione. Hermione knows much more about Harry than Ron does. There is only one person that has never deserted Harry, and there is only one that puts his welfare above her own. Ron will go along with the plans but he does not put Harry safety above his. Ron is his closest male friend. Thank you for allowing my rants.
| WhiteElfElder chapter 46 . 12/23/2010
Talk about your screwed up situations. I personally would take tne offer and go back to return things to the way they should be.
| twisterblake2010 chapter 20 . 12/17/2010
heu great chapter