|Reviews for Oath Breaker II: Dawn and Twilight|
| missemokitty20 chapter 20 . 8/19/2014
i dont get the ending but i love it
| Maelwaedd chapter 20 . 8/19/2014
A intense ending, for an incredibly excellent fic. Thank you again for sharing this, and for all of your hard work. You're a star.
| kitty tokyo uzumaki chapter 20 . 8/19/2014
Thank you so much for this ending. I've never seen any story quite like this. The whole definition of dark magic has changed thanks to you. This story has kept me on my toes since I first started reading it. I hope that any other story you write is just as if not more excellent. Thanks for the wonderful journey, may there be more to come in other works you might think of in the future.
| sunsethill chapter 20 . 8/19/2014
Wow. I'm not sure how I feel about the ending here. So many themes tied together here at the end with a lot of bittersweetness. You have created one of the great anti-heroes of HP fanfiction in your Draco. Severus' point that "lazy" Draco manipulated everyone to do his work for him was quite provocative. And Draco's cynicism also allowed him to save his and Harry's great-great-whatever granddaughter. I love this world so much that I wish I knew what happened with Hermione and Luna and the Weasleys and Dumbledore. I of course hope that Harry and Draco got twins. Surely the hero should at least have gotten that much. I imagine Harry found a way to adopt several children. I can fill in so many details, but I wish we could have you continue to fill them in for us. But I thank you for your committment to finish this saga years after it began.
| K-Marie-M chapter 20 . 8/19/2014
This was a great story with a wonderful ending. I only wish we had one scene or chapter of Harry and Draco as parents.
| jonh73 chapter 20 . 8/19/2014
Holy shit! It's finished. That makes me glad to see it to the end and kinda sad to see its end. I really would like to see more in this universe. You've blended fairy tale magic and Harry Potter extremely well and I want more. I'm going to read it all over again now. Thanks for one of the greatest stories I've ever read.
| Scarlett Foxie chapter 20 . 8/19/2014
Yeah! You finally finished it, KC. And, I greatly enjoyed it. Good to hear from you. I hope you are doing well. Drop me a line sometime. I haven't heard from you in forever.
| Diddleymaz chapter 20 . 8/19/2014
Glad you finished it, bit sorry the epilogue is so dark.
| mothsonfire chapter 20 . 8/18/2014
And you finished! Congratulations on completing this massive undertaking. I wanted to reiterate again my thanks for giving us this wonderful story. The grin on my face right now!
| Min chapter 20 . 8/18/2014
I was so elated when I got the e-mail that there is another chapter of Oath Breaker! A wonderful story, one of my absolute favorites. Thank you for writing.
| MouseKitty chapter 20 . 8/18/2014
Congratulations on completing this long-term project.
| mothsonfire chapter 19 . 8/7/2014
I have been reading fanfiction for 10 years at this point, and I've gone through something like 40 fandoms and even more favorite pairings. I say this just to give some weight to my praise. This is one of about 5 fics that I return to regularly, once a year (this last year) has been the longest I've gone without rereading it since I discovered it when you were first posting Oathbreaker. It is the only WIP I give that kind of attention. I didn't realize it had been updated the extent that it had in 2013, and when I saw that it had, yesterday, when I tracked down a site that still held the fic, I can't tell you how excited I got. It made me very happy. I am looking so forward to seeing the finished product.
I love this fic for a few different reasons; the incredible world-building and back-story, your talent with action sequences (whenever I reread the dungeon flooding I get excited and antsy and pumped up with adrenaline), and what I admit is a slightly more shallow love of really good Draco-centric stories. In the time since I've last checked/found the most recent updates, you have doubled down on all of the above. I love seeing the way this Draco has come into his own! Bringing back the tincture and the theme of broken promises was inspired and made the entire fic feel planned in a way we rarely see.
I know life got in the way of this fic some times, that is absolutely fine. You take your time, and no matter if you finish this year, or in another 10, you will have at least one eager reader waiting to see how Draco will next turn the wizarding world on its head! So, thank you for writing.
| Augustus Featherwing chapter 19 . 8/4/2014
I'd hoped that Oath Breaker II was complete and the sense of horror that I got when I discovered that it was still lacking a chapter was horrible.
Hopefully there'll be a conclusion up soon _
| Cztelnik chapter 19 . 7/26/2014
This series is superb, dark and captivating. I'm out of country with a cell phone, poor wifi and no login pw but when I return I plan to re- read, review, follow and favorite.
As different as it is from JKR's this is still true HP AU. It could be re-written as its own story- shades of the Belgarion? Or wheel of time series ...(and i would buy it and keep it on mu shelf to red and re-read) but the characters would need to be developed, since this story does use ppl and places from HP hence true fanfic. Other than that is a stand alone story that ought to be published.
The old english rhymes and spells and the death and blood magic really help develop the story but the whole story- starting with Draco's snowstorm ride and destroying the Manor while he turns into Mordred -But the amazing fanfic part- merging Severus, Draco, Lucius into a family where Draco and Harry are truly equals but all of them still recognizable as JKR's ppl at the same time really is incredible genius.
Best merging of my favorite characters I've ever seen. Absolutely brilliant. Thank you!
| Maelwaedd chapter 19 . 7/24/2014
This fic/series is amazing. I don't really want to admit what my house looks like, but I feel that I should tell you it's pretty awful because this series has just eaten every moment of my free time (and quite a lot of my not-so-free time too!) because I just couldn't put it down. I love the casual relationship between Lucius, Severus, and Narcissa, and the backstory with the three of them was brilliant. Harry and Draco together is actually a pairing I almost never read, but I love what you did with it and it came across quite realistically (well, if reality included dark magic). The history of the dark wizards was so well thought out, and beautifully introduced, and the language of the spells you've created was honestly beyond me but also great. I also really like how you wrote the political situations. And Hogwarts? I've never before read such an original concept involving the castle's powers and the source of its magic. Dark and gritty as it was, I was blown away. And the brewing of children! *flails*
Everything about this was so great that I'm not sure I can focus on any one bit. Everything about this is amazing. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this. I've already bookmarked it all for re-reading later, but I'm tempted to just start again at the start and let the world carry me away all over again.