VFR6 chapter 19 . 7/21/2008
Hey dude!

i just rereading this fic when i came across this paragraph in this chapter: " Julia sighed."Neither do I."She looked at Michael and John and Chloe."Don't tell me you three are also super heroes?"

Chloe smiled wryly."No,afraid not."

Michael tried to joke weakly,"Not least." " Is it a possible future that Michael is going to be Gold Booster? And if I read it from different angle (45 degree) "Michael tried to joke weakly,"Not least."" Was he breaking the 4th wall?

quite funny if u think it that way. Hey, how bout those Marvel char crossover? Deadpool will be a nice addition though, his constantly breaking the 4th wall by talking to the reader. anyway ADIOS!
Lara-Van chapter 22 . 7/21/2008
Ha! The fighting sequences are soo evoative of the comics!
VFR6 chapter 13 . 7/19/2008
hey man! sorry if i dont put a review for this chap. i know this is a bit late, but i got another solution that can help clark with his dual personality, change superman costume! yea, well the cape and that red underwear is too old. I cant imagine a 25 year old clark wearing that. How about a costume similliar to Gold booster, you know a visor and a half-cowl. Not completely covering his face though. I rhink if u look when superman is split into dual personal he is wearing that kind of costume. Ehh this might be helpfulin anyway.( 'hint'; i just saw a preview of Legion of Superhero on Cartoon Network, i dunno the setting yet but it involves superboy going to the future. 'hint hint'; it'll be cool if a certain greek/amazon princess got stuck/pulled in the future also with superboy. 'hint,hint,hint'; a certain author

that MIGHT be interested in this kinda of pairing MIGHT write a version of superboy/greek-amazon princess romancess fic. 'hint x4

it'll be a perfect setting for teenage romances, ya'know? hint x5

supes might want to use the futuristic costume while he is there right? maybe) hmm i guess thats all i can write for tonite. nite nite. VFR6
Ratdogtwo chapter 22 . 7/18/2008
Awsome chapter. really funny. keep up the awsome work
mfmxxx chapter 22 . 7/18/2008
This was good.

Can't wait for more.
Nightwing 509 chapter 22 . 7/17/2008
I enjoyed reading your story. I liked thre way you used the chracters from the stories from the Brothers Grimm. Please update soon.
blaker316 chapter 22 . 7/17/2008
another awesome chapter
VFR6 chapter 22 . 7/17/2008
Hey there!

Zatanna char seems to be the League's little sister. Hmm cute. It seems every member is so protective of her. And u seems to use her alot for plot devices aren't you? This chap is lighthearted one, I can tell that. Well I got nothing constructive to say anymore, cuz I cant find anything that is wrong with this chap. Bye!
ben10987654321 chapter 22 . 7/17/2008
Another great chapter to a great story. Just curious though at Diana's criticism of Clark fighting. Is that a hint that she'll train him? Hope so. Would love a scene of Diana knocking Clark on his ass a few times. Anyway can't wait till the next update.
VFSNAKE chapter 22 . 7/17/2008
AWESOME! Man things are getting heated between those two. You can feel the love in the air. Write more ASAP!
Tony-El chapter 21 . 7/16/2008
Once again I can't wait for the next chapter. Doesn't anyone notice that Superman and Wonder Woman want each other? I mean doesn't any of the league members notice this?
Lara-Van chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
Wow. This is just out of this world. All the times throughout the series we want to shake CK for being such an idiot are resolved right here.

(The author) managed to capture that 'Smallville feel', but added an entirely new twist to it. I love the idea of Zatanna helping him reinvent Clark. And bringing in so many characters from the comics was sheer genius. Absolute pure genius. I wish all fan fiction could be this well-written and well thought out.

I just have one problem with this story- call me a traditionalist, but I prefer Kal-El to be absolutely, beyond any doubt head-over-heels in love with Lois Lane. I've also always enjoyed the idea of an Aquaman-WW relationship (props for thinking that one up), because they are such opposing characters. An immortal princess from an island of warrior women and no men, and a somewhat sexist, womanizing warrior from Atlantis- you can see where the sparks are. I've always thought that those two relationships ought to be carried out during Aquaman and Lois's lifetimes, and then once they've grown old and died, these two now-single immortals turn to each other for comfort and develop a relationship that way.

It makes more sense to me that way than to completely abandon all previous concepts of the Superman mythos. I suppose you were somewhat suggesting that at the end of the story, but it's kind of unclear.
Ratdogtwo chapter 21 . 7/5/2008
creatures from fairy tales."

LOL great chapter keep up the great work/
BenderTheOffender chapter 21 . 7/5/2008
That was great! I can't wait for more,and for Diana and Clark to hook up, I just can't stand AC lol
Cael-El595 chapter 21 . 7/4/2008
Wow, when you get going, you really get going! Nice work again H!

Finally, the real Justice League! IT's now official- you rule! Great to see that Bruce and Clark are beginning to trust each other. So, the begininning of a legendary partnership.

Love your roster of the League, using Bart and Zee- she should have been a regular in JLU. But aw, no J'onn yet? I suppose you'll bring him in eventually. Or not. Whatever you decide's best for your tale H. You're the amazing author after all.

Uh oh, Lois has swooped in again. And Arthur after Diana? Hehe. Boy, was she jealous or what! LOL. Just like she was with Vixen. Hehe. They've got so much sparks in there without even trying. I just love that.

Ares strikes in Metropolis? The League's just formed, and already their first major challenge as a team. Next chapter sounds very tantalising indeed. How will Kal face up to a magical foe? And that prophecy about their union. Now I'm really hooked!
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