ben10987654321 chapter 23 . 7/22/2008
Loved this chapter. Clark kissing Diana, yay! I do feel slightly sorry for Lois, she does seem to have this habit of being attracted to the wrong men. Clark and Diana sparring i loved. I always think Clark should get brought down to earth so to speak every so often. Can't wait for your next update.
Nightwing 509 chapter 23 . 7/22/2008
I enjoyed reading ur story. I liked what happened when Diana was teaching Clark Martial Arts. Please update soon.
Spaniard chapter 23 . 7/21/2008
Excellent chapter! Please update soon
VFSNAKE chapter 23 . 7/21/2008
YAY! Go Clark. Man Lois is pissed off. LOL! Write more ASAP! If Hyppolitya(sp) finds out about their...making out there will be hell to pay. You think Zee could find a spell to make him immune to magic?
VFR6 chapter 19 . 7/21/2008
Hey dude!

i just rereading this fic when i came across this paragraph in this chapter: " Julia sighed."Neither do I."She looked at Michael and John and Chloe."Don't tell me you three are also super heroes?"

Chloe smiled wryly."No,afraid not."

Michael tried to joke weakly,"Not least." " Is it a possible future that Michael is going to be Gold Booster? And if I read it from different angle (45 degree) "Michael tried to joke weakly,"Not least."" Was he breaking the 4th wall?

quite funny if u think it that way. Hey, how bout those Marvel char crossover? Deadpool will be a nice addition though, his constantly breaking the 4th wall by talking to the reader. anyway ADIOS!
Lara-Van chapter 22 . 7/21/2008
Ha! The fighting sequences are soo evoative of the comics!
VFR6 chapter 13 . 7/19/2008
hey man! sorry if i dont put a review for this chap. i know this is a bit late, but i got another solution that can help clark with his dual personality, change superman costume! yea, well the cape and that red underwear is too old. I cant imagine a 25 year old clark wearing that. How about a costume similliar to Gold booster, you know a visor and a half-cowl. Not completely covering his face though. I rhink if u look when superman is split into dual personal he is wearing that kind of costume. Ehh this might be helpfulin anyway.( 'hint'; i just saw a preview of Legion of Superhero on Cartoon Network, i dunno the setting yet but it involves superboy going to the future. 'hint hint'; it'll be cool if a certain greek/amazon princess got stuck/pulled in the future also with superboy. 'hint,hint,hint'; a certain author

that MIGHT be interested in this kinda of pairing MIGHT write a version of superboy/greek-amazon princess romancess fic. 'hint x4

it'll be a perfect setting for teenage romances, ya'know? hint x5

supes might want to use the futuristic costume while he is there right? maybe) hmm i guess thats all i can write for tonite. nite nite. VFR6
Ratdogtwo chapter 22 . 7/18/2008
Awsome chapter. really funny. keep up the awsome work
Star1X chapter 22 . 7/18/2008
This was good.

Can't wait for more.
Nightwing 509 chapter 22 . 7/17/2008
I enjoyed reading your story. I liked thre way you used the chracters from the stories from the Brothers Grimm. Please update soon.
blaker316 chapter 22 . 7/17/2008
another awesome chapter
VFR6 chapter 22 . 7/17/2008
Hey there!

Zatanna char seems to be the League's little sister. Hmm cute. It seems every member is so protective of her. And u seems to use her alot for plot devices aren't you? This chap is lighthearted one, I can tell that. Well I got nothing constructive to say anymore, cuz I cant find anything that is wrong with this chap. Bye!
ben10987654321 chapter 22 . 7/17/2008
Another great chapter to a great story. Just curious though at Diana's criticism of Clark fighting. Is that a hint that she'll train him? Hope so. Would love a scene of Diana knocking Clark on his ass a few times. Anyway can't wait till the next update.
VFSNAKE chapter 22 . 7/17/2008
AWESOME! Man things are getting heated between those two. You can feel the love in the air. Write more ASAP!
Tony-El chapter 21 . 7/16/2008
Once again I can't wait for the next chapter. Doesn't anyone notice that Superman and Wonder Woman want each other? I mean doesn't any of the league members notice this?
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