|Reviews for Roux's Return|
| Angelica chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Hi! I loved your story but in all honesty It could use work grammatically. For instance "we all new he didn't come back for the door" is incorrect. New in context would be "I got a new purse today!" Angelique squealed. The proper term is knew. Thanks for the entertainment! Oh and great story! Angie
| Amber Hart chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
I'm sorry if I come off as mean from this review but...
YOU NEED TO CHECK IT OVER BEFORE YOU SUBMIT IT. a LOT OF THINGS THAT ARE OOC AND ALSO SOME SPEELIN AND GRAMMAR ERRORS.
yet again, sorryif I sounded mean, just had to get that off my chest.
| Ditte3 chapter 1 . 3/13/2008