Reviews for Changing of the Guard |
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![]() ![]() ![]() really good and interesting story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say, I really liked the story and where you were going with it, but having Draco get arrested because of the outdated laws Lucius was looking up is a cop-out here, the easy way out. You did an absolutely fantastic job of writing Harry with all his different personas, though there were a few times when I was confused about who was in charge, Harry or Brian. I would have liked seeing what Draco tried to do to find Harry before remembering that he sent his elf to follow an owl sent to Harry's house. (Sorry, I'm bad at writing reviews until the very end of a story...) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit, I cannot even express how much I adored this! It was my complete obsession for the past three fucking days! OBSESSION! Beautiful, complex, angsty, humorous, and EVERYTHING! Bravo, truly. Bravo. P.S. "Look, Draco. No hands" that took me a day to get, and when I finally actually understood, I was at work and had to repress my laughter! So funny yet sexy! xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() no really an adventure this feels more like a standard. romance novel well written then other stories and it good but but I wish it was something that kept my attention |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm honestly speechless. the incredible details woven into this story are so delicate and excellently crafted and I won't be forgetting this fic anytime soon, I've just read the whole thing in one go! it went places I didn't expect, especially the LGBT advocacy aspect of it but it was a pleasant surprise. the depth of psychological mind games also left me stunned at every turn, just, wow. I can't believe this work even exists. it's been almost a decade since this story was posted and you probably don't care about it anymore, but you are an incredible writer and thank you for putting it out here for us to read! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm impress. How can you write so much different stories with a lot of difference world/psychology/feeling. I feel like a girl who discover her gift for Christmas. xD You're incredible, thank to be you et good luck for the next ! Seyu' |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story..I don't if you are a psychologist or understand this just because you feel it too but that was such a good description. For people like Harry, who think of themselves as damaged, it is really difficult to trust other people. To avoid arguments, they go along with others even if they don't agree. This story was brilliant and I think the best thing was that it connected with me so much that even though on many points I thought of it as slow yet I could not stop reading. I wanted to see the happy ending or whatever the end is called. Thank you for a beautiful story. |
![]() ![]() Oh my GOD! This story has me SO IN! The last 2 chapters especially were just awesome! I kept expecting Draco to need to reject Harry, and now he's figured it out and wants to keep him!? I love it! I haven't read the whole thing, obviously, but I've seen a lot of aquaintence relationship, then add angst and time successful relationship at the end. Conflict for plots sake. So far, this is much more original and I like it! I shall continue reading, and Thank You! |
![]() ![]() Thank you for writing such a interesting unique and creative story! It honestly is the best one I've read in forever! Especially such a well written one too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story, you are great writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a fantastic read. Took me bloody forever, but was definitely worthwhile and engaging till the very end! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This entire chapter was BRILLIANT |
![]() ![]() I have finished reading this and I absolutely ADORE the fic! I'm honestly putting this one as one of my favourites! Thank you for writing this and good luck with your other writings! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this was fantastic. |
![]() ![]() Brilliant. I can't decide which half I like more, the part before Harry confesses to Draco about Metamorphosis or after he confesses. I love the mind games and tumultuous emotions when they are falling for each other (I was almost disappointing when Harry give in), but now that I've finished he story I realize that it could not have gone on forever (at least if there was to be a happy ending). Besides, the way they complement each other working side by side was fascinating to read about. I especially liked reading about how Harry slips into each of his personas, and how he thinks when assumes one of them. It was interesting to see how he reconciled his personalities so that HE was the one in charge, while still retaining them as part of himself. Also, good job portraying the movement for LGBT rights, especially the way you reshaped it to be believable for the wizarding world. They have different customs, different laws, different methods, but the essential rebellion is the same. |