Reviews for Hit the Floor Running
confessionsong chapter 9 . 1/17
These characters are so shallow and ooc. Nothing they do is believable because this would never happen in reality.
Demonic girl111 chapter 11 . 9/13/2015
Well at least Hinata's not a slutty witch like her RTN self that I imagined her to be. I'm actually kind of happy about that. I hope she leaves Sasuke's sorry ass to become the proud and strong CEO of her company, that would make my day.
Demonic girl111 chapter 10 . 9/13/2015
Well didn't they get comfy with each other? X3 (Wiggles eyebrows suggestively)
Demonic girl111 chapter 5 . 9/13/2015
(Starts laughing while trying not to fall off my bed) Ain't that the truth? XD
colouredthinking chapter 24 . 8/11/2014
Re-read this one! Moving on to re-read the Sequel tonight!

I love those two stories, they've kept me up last summer and they'll certainly keep me up this summer as well.

I wanted to say thank you for creating something so good and beautiful, although I'll probably do that again after I finish re-reading "You Wear Insanity Well"!
ougley chapter 24 . 11/10/2012
thank you , I enjoyed it
sortofbored chapter 24 . 9/10/2012
Awesome story
Sara chapter 10 . 7/23/2012
Love the ending 2 this chap! Narusaku 4evr! :)
NamiNavigator chapter 12 . 3/12/2012
How old is Naruto if he hasn't been back to Italy for 14 years? Loving the story otherwise.
Garts chapter 24 . 9/21/2011
I'm not sure about this story. You created robots instead of human beings. Your characters were dolls. They defined themselves by their experiences and their relationships with other people. The characters had no inner world...

The deepest level the couple reach is just Naruto's past. You needed to give them perspectives about the world, contradicting views regarding abstract concepts... Your story lacked humanity.

Love is portrayed in a very shallow manner. The communication between Naruto and Sakura was practically non-existent. Whom did they fall in love with? The person beneath those frivolous dialogs, or an illusion?

On another point, the motivations behind the plot were just unbelievable.

This barely passes a comedy, because it's not really funny, even though it's enjoyable and the way you write is pleasant enough. Keep working, your creativity needs polishing... :)
Silver E. Sparrow chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Ooh great start, you already have me hooked xD.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Man, you're suppose to cool the whole bottle down, not put ice in the drink. Other than that, cool chapter... looks very intriguing.
Stryker114 chapter 24 . 7/19/2011
Loved the story a little said though shikamaru did not get to go with them in end
Illuminatedessence chapter 2 . 6/6/2011
Some parts of the plot? This is almost exactly like that move French Kiss...or whatever it was called.
Joele chapter 25 . 4/22/2011
they should make this into a movie for reals i have a request read this story A voice in the wind by tricksie it's good.

u are friggin awesome.i wish i could write more but i hav to go to sleep bye

Joele
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