Reviews for Eventful Day
phillly24 chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
dat was cute i liked da endin
Nayeli chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
I enjoy it reading this a lot, good work!:)
stary202 chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Oh. Ultra-cutew

Please, write more. You're just so goodw
Sabauuga chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
hehe nice ending, good story for a first time...

now I just wanted to say you are welcome to check out my story too. I have 1 you see, an ItaSasu, and i noticed you like those in your profile. But I gotta warn you, I do not like Sakura very much (I'm purely yaoifan) and she has some...well not very nice tendencies...

Anthoinette chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
One thing;I'm here for the sasunaru. I don't mind if you describe Sasuke or Naruto in the way they look, but the whole thing about Sakura ans sai was way to much information. you probably could have used those words to form a interesting battle between Sasuke and Naruto. Cause training for 2 minutes is not exactly exiting. and I know how hard it is to write action scenes; try to change the plot of the story. :)

All in all, I really enjoyed it! X3
allanimehere chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
Love your story XD

thanks :)