|Reviews for to sin, and salvation|
| Il'Diko chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
You played with Edward very well! :) A great-great-great caharacter sketch, you write Edward VERY well!
| alisa231 chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
This was an absolute pleasure to read. Your understand of Edward's character is so very genuine. The combination of the recurring lines on aging and longing were extremely effective. I especially enjoyed the scene when he watches others make love through his mind. That was heart breaking. Your writing is poetic and evokes a lot of imagery. I especially enjoyed the ending. )
| PenName76 chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
How this story doesn't have a billion glowing reviews is beyond me. I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE all your stories about Edward and his loneliness. I always come back and read them. It occurred to me I had never reviewed them before. You write beautifully and evoke Edward's essence & experience so perfectly. I would love to see a story like this cover the events of Breaking Dawn: the wedding, his wedding night, Renesmee, Bella's change. I love how you touch upon small moments of a bigger web of existence.
I would also like to see all of those moments I touched on as seen through the eyes of Edward's human mother. Just a suggestion.
| Silverlake chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
I loved the history. And you really capture Edward's character!
| Indil Elondili chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
I liked it a lot! Great job!
| rainbow haired auror chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
This is really pretty. Well maybe that's not the right word, but I liked it anyway. I would have liked to see his reaction to Alice and Jasper when he first sees the way they act together, but that's just me.
| siruisblack18 chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
I really liked this! especially how you seperated all the parts.