|Reviews for Honey and Wine|
| AllayahTali chapter 3 . 5/23/2015
It's a good story, i'm interested ;) You write very well, i really enjoyed it!
However some of your hebrew is slightly off, it's a tricky language if it is not native to you! ;) it's mostly okay, but be careful about masculine and feminine words. It's different when talking to a man or a woman, for example i love you would be 'ani ohevet otcha' to a male, and 'ani ohev otach' to a woman. I am a native hebrew speaker, if you want any help just PM me and i'll do my best :)
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/30/2013
There was only one time that Israel gave the capital punishment and that was to Adolf Eichimman in 1962 and now there are no capital punishments in Israel
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/30/2013
Belive it or not mesada is an actual unit within Mossad and they do take care on assassinations
| Crazy Ninja chapter 17 . 2/21/2013
this story was absolutely AMAZING! one of my all time favourites well done :D
| WildFireBurnsTheForest chapter 17 . 8/27/2012
Awesome! Lost of kids LOL.
| Canada Dakota Faith Haswari chapter 11 . 1/14/2012
It has this really important aspect. And I like it
| ContentsPriceless chapter 5 . 9/14/2010
Do you LOVE killing people or something? What's wrong with you?
Just kidding. Love your story thought.
| hannahelaine13 chapter 17 . 3/24/2010
So, I'm pretty much IN LOVE with this story. :D
I'm kind of curious how a double government salary is going to keep a family of eight going, though, lol.
And I noticed something: Of the six kids, three had "A" names, and the other three had "M" names. Cute. I'm unsure if that was on purpose, but amusing nonetheless.
| Fsdge chapter 16 . 3/15/2010
Your hebrew is wrong
| LilyLover chapter 12 . 3/14/2010
"Love of Allah?"
Jewish people do not worship Allah. Muslims do.
| LilyLover chapter 9 . 3/14/2010
How old's Matai?
I'm assuming it was Zi's dad who was the leak.
| LilyLover chapter 5 . 3/14/2010
That made me cry. Poor baby Calev. Poor Ziva,
| LilyLover chapter 3 . 3/14/2010
Ani ohev otach- male to female
Ani ohev otcha- male to male
Ani ohevet otach- female to female
Ani ohevet otcha- female to male
I love it
| HelaGreenEyes chapter 17 . 2/17/2010
really loved your work! A really good story, good background i suppose...
Just I think it is a little weird that ziva went over the deth of her child so fast. sure she was sad and everything, but i think if your own child dies, its not after 3 "long" month that you are going to be alright again..? But thats my opinion.
So big thank you for your story, i went horribly late to bed yesterday because of it, but loved your story!
best wishes from switzerland
| MoveForward chapter 17 . 2/3/2010