Reviews for The Lion and the Lamb: PART TWO!
Mystic Fairy Tame chapter 18 . 3/14/2013
Lied more lemon
Guest chapter 5 . 3/13/2013
This story has no direction. I can't read anymore of this. Writing skills are seriously lacking here. But do continue to write, this is just constructive criticism. You can always improve.
ShawtieeIDGAF chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
U should write more plz! ...before " the end of the world"...jkjk...but PLEASE write more!its SOP good!
DauntlessTheBrave chapter 5 . 7/9/2012
Trust Edward to be like that! mmmh. k, im horny. i have alot of dirty thoughts
DauntlessTheBrave chapter 4 . 7/9/2012
Haha! Typical Emmett. Funny for Edward to get the sex talk for once, not Bella! xD
lol. okay, excuse my random comments :)
DauntlessTheBrave chapter 3 . 7/9/2012
i agree, i tend to drunkenly slur my words when im writing at 3am in the morning... then i fall asleep on the keyboard, and when i wake up, my screen has:
jskhfakjsh uhuohshkjhadoahy kjahsf jsahdsaldjlkasjd... written on it and i have to go delete it all -_-
but this was really good for a late night read , muahaha :)
DauntlessTheBrave chapter 2 . 7/9/2012
Mmh. Dirty sex in strange places. God, i have such a dirty mind. -_-
DauntlessTheBrave chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Hah! This is so super-sweet. THough Charlie is such a spoiler. -_-
exactly like he should be! LOL. lurve it :)
AstrologyQueen chapter 18 . 7/7/2012
I love your story. It's amazing. Please update soon unless you're on hiatus.
Oceanus365 chapter 18 . 5/30/2012
Imagine my disappointment when I realized you hadn't updated since I would love to know what was up with Carlisle and Charlie! If you get this, and you are still interested on writing, I hope you continue!
detsinbaby chapter 18 . 2/27/2012
I hope u update soon
paulineavelino chapter 18 . 1/14/2012
Bella21 chapter 18 . 11/20/2011
I love this story. Please update fast...
brandy chapter 18 . 8/20/2011
you should make a sequel
ElleCullen17 chapter 18 . 6/13/2011
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