Reviews for The Lion and the Lamb: PART TWO!
myedward1918 chapter 18 . 8/9/2010
i loved this story , i am looking forward to more! great job!
Babe Pryor chapter 18 . 7/19/2010
This has been a delightful Romp in the sheets with Edward and Bella..they are stepping it up a bit, getting it on in public in a changing room at the mall was my fave, other than their 1st time in her truck! wowZa..xx
Babe Pryor chapter 16 . 7/19/2010
dammit this is SOOOooo hot! Edward and Bella in a sex free for all..I'm IN..xx
EdwardsGirl10 chapter 14 . 7/17/2010
Oh ya! Can't wait!
EdwardsGirl10 chapter 12 . 7/17/2010
Wonderful!
EdwardsGirl10 chapter 11 . 7/15/2010
Edward's the best point of view! ;)
EdwardsGirl10 chapter 9 . 7/15/2010
I always prefer Edward's point of view and I wish you great success on your (back then) new job!
EdwardsGirl10 chapter 2 . 7/13/2010
That was very Hot and very Nice! ;)
BABY CAKES LOVER OF EDWARD XXX chapter 5 . 7/7/2010
IT IS A REALLY COOL I LOVE YOUR STORIES YOU SHOULD TOTALLY THINK ABOUT WRITTING A STORY AND GETTING IT PUBLISHED GOOD LOOK CARNT WAIT 2 READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT XXX :)
Karen Macias chapter 18 . 7/6/2010
H3y i r3ly l!k3 uR 5t0ry

PLESE update

& !f uD0nt th3n l35t f!n!sh it
LindsayCullen chapter 18 . 7/4/2010
cant wait for more xoxo lindsay
twihard12341885 chapter 18 . 6/23/2010
after reading all 18 chapters, i'm finally reviewing! you seem to get the balance just right between lemons and love... but i dont like it when edward swears. I know this is fanfic (a very good one at that!) but it doesn't really stay true to him...he wouldn't be so, i dunno, improper. (if that's the right word) you do sucessfully turn me on with each and every lemon, especially in BPOV. you are very talented. Please continue to write! ''Lemons'' count toward one of my reccomended 5-a-day! Much love. xxx
Dark Angel chapter 18 . 6/6/2010
Please please write another chapter, this story is so good, please
Dark Angel chapter 11 . 6/6/2010
That was so hot and cool.
Dark Angel chapter 10 . 6/6/2010
That was super hot, you are a good writer
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