Reviews for The Lion and the Lamb: PART TWO!
Kilani Heals chapter 2 . 3/5/2008
Gratifying... oh my God. I want my own Edward. My panties need to be untwisted. Nice touch with the popsicle. :) She was right, if he had to squeeze he had to do it where it didn't tickle.

Loved it. Spin cycle, or shower? Or hot and heavy meadow with a bit of rain? Geez... so many to choose from.

BTW, would you beta my story? It's up, but I missed a couple of things. It's what I get for my impatience. I'm missing words, or have too many linking verbs.
divine-dreams chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
great sequel. :]
Kilani Heals chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
*fans self* I am never gonna think about a breakfast table the same again!

You know, you should have just put this as the second chapter in The Lion and the Lamb! And of course, keep the smut coming; naturally! :)

Poor Charlie. Actually, poor Edward. Sex is always addicting for the n00bs. Or so I've heard.

! *re-reads again*
Jenny chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
hahaha i lovee it :P

write a parrt 3:D

its greatt
MinniMuffin chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
Awesome! Poor chair...
hellocrystal chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
lol nice..

poor chair , and charile lol

well you should just write a story
SisterGrimmErin chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
LOL. i love it, write more!
halojones chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
hahaha, I love how Charlie's going to come how to a ripped and battered kitchen seat. That was really good.
beggingtobebitten chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
wow. im really glad you did a sequel! me liked it. hehe. maybe they should try lemons away from furniture of any kind. it seems to be costing a lot of money at this rate lol...
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