|Reviews for Rebellions and Revolutions|
| poka chapter 2 . 1/4/2009
Mistakes: Ash Ketchup
Well done. This story has indeed got my intrest.
| xxFraise chapter 2 . 12/21/2008
Not bad Although you have the justice system messed up... Basically, killing two people (or Pokemon, I guess) wouldn't be a life sentence unless it was pre-meditated, but there was no proof to that (since, well, it wasn't) thus it would only be 2ed degree. Also, the most dangerous killers are serial killers, and even they don't have cuffs on all the time. I know you probably didn't really think much, but I'm a big time law fan (I know, weird) so it annoys me. Not to mention anyone who watches Law & Order knows this isn't how it goes.
| pikagurl23 chapter 2 . 7/29/2008
This fic is quite interesting and I am anxious to see what becomes of the two trainers. Please update soon and keep up the good work!
| iAshleigh chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
Well, I just thought I should review and all!
Well, Hm. I...
I absolutely LOVE~ you idea! It's intriguing and it's fabulosly written! Now, I'm onto chapter 2!
| Raven the Ravenous chapter 2 . 3/11/2008
Amazing. Your writing amazes me. Wow, so much has happened in ten years...though that won't be known until next chapter, which I'll be looking forward too. ;D
They wouldn't let him keep a picture of Misty OR Pikachu in the ten years? As for all the commotion that happened that night...I think Ash was framed though I really hope Misty and Pikachu are not dead. But surprises unfold, truths are told, and only until the next chapter can things start to make sense. And yes, I hope Duplica lives but how can a Ditto as a badge, use Thunder Wave, unless I've somehow overlooked the Move Tutor and TM then nevermind that I asked that question. I got a feeling this fic will be a huge one, with all of this happening...this certainly does not seem to be a short fic at all. And yes, I am hooked now. XD
| Raven the Ravenous chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
Interesting...though I am now very curious about what caused this all to happen? I mean, Ash just outrightly killed his fiance and his beloved Pokemon. I'm interested in seeing where this can go.