Reviews for Cub
Taz chapter 4 . 7/8
I am confused about your last paragraph concerning Remus's thoughts.

You say that he left the Dursley house about two years ago, but it would have to be 3 years if he was starting Hogwarts at age 11.

If Harry missed the start of Hogwarts and was in fact 17 years old now, then he would have been missing from the Dursley's for 9 years.

Your ending of Chapter 4 is confusing.
thehelpinghand chapter 54 . 6/15
i read all of this story and really like it although i had slight issues with reading some of the more insane voldemort parts kept picturing my brother saying some of those tings had had to walk away before i died of laughter). i am really glade that you continued including the pack all the way till the end and did not finish with a Harry point of view. it was nice to just have it as a Vaughn's since she did not get a lot of point of view references despite being the second main character in the story.
you characterization of Ginny was brilliant. i don't normally ready good Ginny stories simply because few authors can pull it off well - especially when Harry and Ginny are not together.
thehelpinghand chapter 45 . 6/15
i think it would have been much better if none of the Weasley had been imprisoned for hurting Ginny. Share the Fear of the red heads and their fierce protection of their little sister.
iyu chapter 3 . 5/28
they better meet up again or something may happen
pikachucat chapter 54 . 4/9
misherukuro chapter 54 . 1/19
This was a very well written and entertaining fic thanks for the read. ,
goodpie2 chapter 2 . 12/24/2014
It has potential, but it's poorly written. Not only do you swap between past and present tense, you swap between first and third person. What the actual fuck.
honore chapter 54 . 10/12/2014
Loved it, Thanks
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 13 . 8/8/2014
The writer oh god not again did manage to make lockheart likeable
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 12 . 8/8/2014
Either ginny didnt get the duary or pyg us a seer
TheLadyJaye chapter 22 . 7/17/2014
Um, Easter is ALWAYS on a Sunday, so how the heck could it have been on a Wednesday?
TheLadyJaye chapter 12 . 7/17/2014
Pyg is a seer...
Donal chapter 54 . 6/23/2014
What's with the kids weird names?
tkepner chapter 5 . 6/2/2014
I know this story is completed, just thought I would pass this on in case you have never heard of it.

"...though you're trust is lacking..." - should be "your"

This is a common problem with writers. Easy trick to always get it right is to expand the contraction "you're" to its full length: "you are" and see if the sentence still works. Thus "...though you're trust is lacking..." becomes "...though you are trust is lacking...". Clearly, "you are" is incorrect, and using the contraction must be wrong as well, so "your" is the correct word to use.

Use this rule for ALL contractions and you'll never make that mistake again.
recount chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
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