|Reviews for Responsibilities and Accomplishments|
| The Duelist's Heiress chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
Your sonnet is nice, but it's missing the nice in depth look at a character that your other ones have.
| PhantomBialystock chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
This was okay, but I felt it wasn't as good as your other ones. I haven't read many sonnets, so I don't know that much about them, but I feel that you did more "telling" than "showing" so to speak. With your other poems you did a lot of showing like in most poetry, using figures of speech and other stuff that really pumps up your writing. Here it sounded more like prose just split up into lines. I would suggest taking a look at this again if you really want it to be great.