|Reviews for Life sucks!|
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/29
This is a very nice story, well written and made. Please continue to write and good luck to you. Also hah ha there's a leisure suit Larry reference in this chapter.
| Traiken chapter 24 . 1/10
I can't wait to see more!
| Martenzo chapter 24 . 1/9
I think this might just be the most awesome thing I've ever read. I hope you continue this someday.
| Guest chapter 24 . 9/30/2013
hey I would like to say that you are one of my favourite authors and I love your stories the only problem I have with this is you haven't updated in a while please update more :(
| Khorale chapter 3 . 8/10/2013
Whoa. I'd never thought Jean and Isley'd be so cute together.
| Ironclad chapter 24 . 8/10/2013
Keep up the great work. This has provided over an hour of great entertainment.
Also if clare meets teresa she's going to literally shit a brick.
| hplo chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
I'll be honest, I'm not big on slash because it usually doesn't feel right in the context of the universe the author is writing in and about half the time it's just plain badly written. Here though it actually works both in continuity and writing. It's fun to just see the insane side of Ophelia and Clare's relationship or the quirkiness of Miria and Tabitha. Also Riful is all kinds of awesome in this fic.
Only two complaints. First I feel that you're adding too many character's too fast. Galatea's sudden appearance breaks off the whole Clarice and Miata arc a bit too swiftly, there needed to be a more steady introduction like how Riful was introduced I feel (which actually did really work well). Also I feel the number of characters you've got atm is probably sufficient. Add anymore and it's likely to overcrowd the story a bit too much.
Second point; I feel you could've taken a lot of the character's further, adding little nuisances to make them seem more human, also make the speech rhythms more human like (apologies for the inaccuracy). This is probably nitpicking but it's a point that I see so much in fan fiction and indeed published writing, especially fantasy; there always does seem to be this huge gaping pit between character and human being separated by little tiny details that make a character believable. I do believe that your characters are somewhere in between in that they do interact with the world in a believable way but there lacking a certain dimension. It doesn't make them any less entertaining to watch, it's just something that I feel could elevate your writing to the next level.
I know I may sound like I'm bashing this fic but honestly it's really, really good (I've read four times over lol) and it does a have a lot of positives, it's just those were the two points that stood out for me. Hope you finish this one day and best of luck with your writing,
| HUNRonin chapter 24 . 6/6/2013
Prety please write more of this!
| Jynx chapter 18 . 4/5/2013
All hail Ophelia's sex life. o-o
| Jynx chapter 16 . 4/5/2013
LOL! Kigo reference! Or should I say 'Kimo'? I can't sleep on this story. It surprises me every time.
| Jynx chapter 12 . 4/5/2013
Ophelia adding fuel to Claire's fire and taking her in the back seat. This chapter is by far my fav. I won't lie I read this store for them. Great job.
| Jynx chapter 14 . 4/5/2013
lol! Ophelia's saw reference! xD I'm so done I freaking love Ophelia.
| SerasCain chapter 24 . 3/27/2013
Absolutely love this story. It actually makes me like characters I didn't like originally. The humor is exquisite and it's always a blast to read. Hopefully you decide to continue this story because I can't wait to read more!
| Mina chapter 24 . 1/28/2013
Please update! This story is so funny! I love it!
| X-elemental chapter 23 . 10/30/2012
I'd note here that Miata-Clarice duo came across more as an expansion than interaction in this chapter. This was the most unglaring thing about the chapter - so unglaring that it's missing completely in reviews for chapter 23(looking for the holes and all that :p)