Reviews for One Minor Drawback
seinzess1 chapter 1 . 2/24
I just don't feel it. It's just so deep.. loved it thoughtfully.
Dreams of Shadows chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
wow... this is deep
yaoi-lover13 chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
This was so lovely. I think you should write poetry for other pairings... the funny thing: I was listening to a song called 'Poetic Tragedy' as I read this, lol. Check out the song, and keep up the good work!
ilkkuva chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
MEEH!

-is emo-

Poor Sasori no danna...poor Dei-kun...it;s like a tragic love story...meh...-sniff-
Rusalian96 chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
that was the best poetry ever
Myra A chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
What? This brilliant piece of art needs more reviews!

That was beautiful, bitter but sweet. That's Sasori, in my point of view. Good job.
ShadowWolf666 chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
This is a good poem. Kinda sad bet very good. Keep up the good work.
Devilis Kyuu chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
T_T The last line was so sad... Anyway, nice poem