|Reviews for Small Thoughts|
| Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
This was a good poem, well-written.
There were a few grammatical mistakes I found within this poem. In the third line, the first "And" can be taken out. In the fourth line, the second "behold" sounds like it is repetitive from the third line and should probably be taken out as well as the word after it, another "and". I'm not sure if there are anymore grammatical mistakes, but I would suggest re-reading this poem again, just in case you see anymore grammatical errors.
Otherwise, nice job writing this poem.
| electric gurrl chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Wow...really kind of deep in the language and actually pretty Frodo. Nice poem _
| Larner chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Oh, I can see such thoughts.
| a rohan soldier chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
Waa! (hic) I miss my ring my preciousious
| Love Of Blood chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
The power of reading a book!
| MerrytheHobbit chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
Beautiful! I love it!