Reviews for When They're Gone
Kaworu chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
Please stop this, this is disgusting and I feel sick. You completely ruined all the characters and you failed in your attempts to make it "sexy". This is complete trash and I hope that you never write for this pairing ever again. My friend and I are both reporting you and your story.
Kaworu chapter 5 . 8/30/2014
I am extremely uncomfortable with this fic.
You had the chance for trans girl Shinji and you blew it.
Not to mention the sex every chapter.
Kaworu wouldn't act that way because he cares too much.
If this story was meant to be sexy, it ended up being a far cry from it.
Please don't write any more Kawoshin like this, all it does is bastardize the characters and make them caricatures of themselves.
I almost threw up five times because of how upset this fic made me.
fallenangel-tabris chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
I'm going to be very blunt here.
This story is the worst story I have ever read, I felt sick while reading it. Not only did you write the weirdest plot, which is more like a "porno" plot than a real plot, you completely ruined the characters. First off: you had the chance to write trans girl Shinji and completely disregarded it. Secondly, you made "Kaworu" out to be this extreme seme- to the point he barely cared for any pain Shinji felt. "Kaworu" called Shinji a slut and a few other things in this fic. Kaworu would never do anything like this because that's not his personality. Then you made Kensuke homophobic, which makes no sense really. Now, let's go onto one of the most problematic parts of the fic. It was completely unrealistic. All they had was spit and fingers in place of lube, and the way "Kaworu" kept going fast would be really painful not to mention would tear Shinji's butt. Also, they had sex once every chapter of this fic, which seems to be spread out in the course of five days. Sex every day like that would be unhealthy for them- especially the way they had it. They didn't practice safe sex in any way shape or form. Let's face it; you borrowed their names and made a porno. That is exactly what you did and you can not deny that. How dare you ruin characters to that extent. Don't write for this pairing ever again. Keep your porn plots to yourself next time.
"Lemons" aren't even supposed to be on here.
My friend and I are going to report this story and you.
asukalanqleysoryu chapter 2 . 8/30/2014
what the fuc
asukalanqleysoryu chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
tbh im just outraged like. how could you
asukalanqleysoryu chapter 5 . 8/30/2014
literally the worst thing ive ever read?
asukalanqleysoryu chapter 4 . 8/30/2014
LadyAbigail chapter 5 . 1/26/2014
This story is 1 epicly romantic story. Its pretty good.
EVAGeek3 chapter 4 . 6/20/2013
This is seriously the best Kaworu x Shinji fanfic I HAVE EVER READ! :D It just works perfectly, especially Shinji as a crossdresser, it fits him well. I also love how you put Kaworu and Shinji's relationship, they are direly in love! Yayyy Its just beautiful how they will do anything for each other's love and respect each other's actions, so cute! :3 Thank you for writing this! :D I would looooveeee more!
Macca's Well chapter 5 . 12/7/2011
This srory is great! More please!
LittleSheikah chapter 5 . 2/27/2011
Great and sexy story! You should make

Shinji and Kaworu go to the beach or a

pool.. ;)
prince2345 chapter 5 . 6/21/2010
wahhhh! what a cute story i just love it! please continue!

sincerely, the prince
Turquoise.ebonyfox chapter 4 . 6/21/2010
Hm. . .I'm not convinced that Kensuke is being truthful. A lot of people that are homophobic are in denial of their sexuality. I wouldn't doubt it if her was a cross-dresser himself. After all, he seems a bit girlish himself. Are you going to put his side of the story at chapter 6 of what he was really doing?
Dragoon Galaxy chapter 5 . 4/12/2010
how about adding a little bondage?
Ilphae chapter 4 . 2/4/2010
Aww, where is teh Rei? I wanted to see her reaction / lack thereof!
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