Reviews for Second chance to Love
Harmonic Sniper chapter 10 . 6/20/2011
I love this story so much I've read it about 4 times now and never get sick of it! and the sequel is amazing as well you're a really good writer keep up the work!
Bluelgummies chapter 10 . 1/10/2010
epic...your story is a certain must-read! :O

I usually hate adventure-ish stories, 'cos they tend to go flaccid and very boring-extreme on ;) yours was a very refreshing read:D

Mans, this piece of writing certainly kept me turning the page (ok, metaphorically speaking...clicking the "next" button might be more approppriate, I realize...) xDD

Okey, but apart from drooling all over you and your story (I apologize...I'll wipe it as soon as am done xDD) agh...poor Vexey-poo :( (not gonna attack you though, not a crazy-Vexen-fan-girl...yet...) lol... mans, he was so evill in this story (so were the rest of the Org-gone-bad, though I expected Xaldin and Marly...yeah, especially Marly to be bad guys...)...ok, lol. And Xemnas' role was quirky, and it fit, oddly enough :))

Yeah, gotta appreciate your writing...your character realization is way too well done! I think I had more pointers, but seriously...I think I should stop drooling now... xDD

*wipes shoes and story with a cloth*

x 3 o
howlingwolf201 chapter 9 . 12/10/2009
This story was AMAZING! i think you really ended it well, and all over the plot and storyline were very original X3 and i do think this is the first time ever where instead of worshiping the goblin king, demyx acutally is the son of/is to become the goblin king XXD

Also, i stumbbled upon a song that really reminded me of chapter 30 (hence why i reviewed on this one and not the epiloge) but the song is Viva La Vida by Coldplay: /watch?v44xirQ55IgA
theauthor94 chapter 10 . 4/19/2009
I really loved this story

Seamistress89 chapter 10 . 4/10/2009
Kya! Such a beutiful story! I absolutely loved almost every part, aside from Morpheus anyways.

No offense or anything, the man just creeped me out.

Anyways, like I said, I loved the story.
smileintears chapter 10 . 6/18/2008
oh... God... where do i begin? i absolutely LOVED this. the Labyrinth crossover was AMAZING (when i first saw the name "Tobi" i automatically thought of Labyrinth, but then i decided it was a rubbish idea and threw it out- that was stupid) i also noticed that this had a very Tsubasa-esqe feel to it (or atleat it did for me). i also loved how you pumped up demyx from bitch to bad boy street fighter! you can only poke the lion in the eye for so long... but you had me up until 4:15 am squirming, hissing, giggling and cheering! thanks for getting me engaged. i ABSOLUTELY loved it, keep writting!
Kya Strife chapter 10 . 4/12/2008
AW! I Love it! The mix with the Labrinth and Kingdom Hearts is amazing!
Omoi-ame chapter 10 . 4/5/2008
WOW! I Absolutely LOVE it! X3

I never would have thought of this kind of thing, love the pirates & labyrinths _ lol.
Manixa chapter 9 . 3/31/2008
So David Bowie is Dem's father, huh?

I've been in a giggle fit while reading this whole chapter thinking of that.


I really love fan fiction! Xig/Dem is my favorite pairing, but I can never find any stories that hold my attention. This has been the first in a long time!
RomylusHikaru chapter 2 . 3/6/2008
You never cease to amaze me! You're a very good writer!

Thanks for uploading your story, I look forward to more of your works! o
Namii Levee chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
NO! not the evil cliffie of doom! take it away, take it away PLEASE! nice job!
RomylusHikaru chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
I really love how this story starts! Oh gosh, a cliff hanger! I'll be looking forward to reading more of this story! Besides, this is probably one of my most favorite pairings.

~R. Hikaru