Reviews for Without You
biteorimprintonme chapter 22 . 5/13/2009
okay i have been waiting for weeks for an update m what have you got to say for youself?

i like this chapter!

hope you update soon!
Sylverster chapter 22 . 5/13/2009
fiberkitty chapter 22 . 5/13/2009
I loved how you portrayed Laurent and Jake's wariness but had Laurent actually be a nice guy to Jake. He didn't "pull an Edward" and act cocky.

Great chapter.
Slam2k chapter 22 . 5/13/2009
I'm always so happy to see an update for this story .. thanks!

I can't wait to see what happens next for bella, but I have to say I'm hoping that there won't be a love triangle between bella, laurant, and jake. I'd like to see Bella move forward with Laurant, and start to realize her worth and gain some much needed confidence.
Karasays chapter 22 . 5/13/2009
even though you took absoultly forever! to post...

lol i am totally kidding! I will wait as long as i have to for this great story!

i love it!
snoodles chapter 22 . 5/12/2009
That was very noble of Jake. I'm glad someone is writing him in a good light.
culdrencakeaddiction chapter 21 . 5/4/2009
ok well here is a review. that waz rilly good i hope you update soon xause i need somepthing good to read or i might blow up
PrincessCupcake chapter 21 . 5/3/2009
is bella gonna tell charlie that the cullens are vampires and that she might become one? Aww poor Jacob&Charlie they freaked when they saw the ring. I loved it either way
bellandeannedwardfan78 chapter 21 . 5/3/2009
loved it and sorry i had not reviewed for the last three chapters give or take lol love it even if bella isnt with edward i think it works with laurent and cant wait until u update next time
Karasays chapter 21 . 5/3/2009
ahh, i love this story!

I do wish you would update more, but i understand people have "real" lives. lol its boaring for us housewifes, lol.

"wait, the frech guy at the airport?" was my favorite part!
356 chapter 21 . 5/2/2009
Very nice chapter! I am happy Bella agreed to marry Laurent. Please update again really soon! :)
Tamza chapter 21 . 5/2/2009
WOO awsome chap! update soon
Shakari chapter 21 . 5/2/2009
This is great! I was laughing so hard at the ring part. Can't wait for the next chapter!
snoodles chapter 21 . 5/2/2009
So Bella and Laurent are getting married. The next chapter should be a good if you let Charlie talk to Laurent.
Charlie Drear chapter 21 . 5/2/2009
i would love to read more and wait eagerly for the next chapter.
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