Reviews for Oneesama
Guest chapter 2 . 1/3/2020
I always think fanfic writers make too much of Shizuru’s flirty behaviour.
It’s one thing to be flirty and something completely different to be unfaithful.
Natsuki is everything to Shizuru and the only person she would do anything for - including give her life - I think her flirting is completely harmless.
And her flirting with Arika in episode two is often misinterpreted.
She wanted Natsuki to keep Arika at Garderobe until they figured out why she had the blue sky gem and who her Otome mother was.
Her wink at Natsuki was to tell her to play along.
And she didn’t kiss Arika - she just blew on her ear.
Hookedonreading chapter 7 . 7/5/2017
Greetings Leebot!'s an epic short love the romance and surprise that Nat did for Shiz. Wah...I would love to have that in real life. Gawd to be beautiful, smart and rich...I definitely would trade them for my WII games and console!

Sweet and this fic!

thanks so much and I do hope you have more fics floating in your mind and you want to put into paper...

Take care...Ciao!
Hookedonreading chapter 2 . 7/4/2017
Greetings Leebot! I can't believe that I missed this fic from you! I love your Perchance to a dream and re-read that many times.
Really, this fic was posted here for a long time? Gawd, I must be blind. Your writing style is so engaging and yes, I am easily spelled bound by this fic.

I just had to drop you a line to let you know that I also enjoy this fic. Love the different POV's. :)

Okay onward to the next chapter!
Guest chapter 7 . 8/11/2016
Poor Shizuru Viola. So misunderstood. I can come up with perfectly reasonable explanations for every instance of so-called "flirting“ in Mai-Otome, none of which have anything to do with making Natsuki jealous. But nobody ever gives her the benefit of doubt.
That being said, your story is great, and I enjoyed reading it.
Ell chapter 7 . 6/27/2015
Sooo good! Soooo amazing! Your stories are always just perfectly amazing! Thank you for writing it
AntiopeDeThemiscyre chapter 2 . 12/7/2014
I'm reading this fic again (I cannot get enough of your writing :P ).
I really like the way you described Natsuki's feelings, some things reminds me of myself when I was a teen.
AntiopeDeThemiscyre chapter 7 . 10/4/2014
Another very good story :)
I liked the alternating between past and present, and between Natsuki's and Shizuru's point of view, so we had two stories in one, it made it really dynamic.
And the proposal... Natsuki is really a hopeless romantic

I recognized some elements from the CD Drama, in particular from the Shizuru Viola's memories. My favourite fanfics are those which are coherent with the series, which could have been written by Mai HiME-Mai Otome scenarists, and which fill in the gaps they let...
I'm sad I was never able to find a translation of Natsuki Kruger's memories :(

Now I'll read your other stories in the same universe so I'll learn more about Shizuru and Natsuki's lifes when they were students :)

Thank you again for your writting :)
Taka Akaboshi chapter 7 . 7/16/2014
Its so sweet...such a complete feeling about how Natsuki and Shizuru got together. I love it! Thank you for writing this :)
annoyingLONER chapter 7 . 6/3/2012
this fic is great! thanks for the fic.
Wolf-of-Five-Elements chapter 7 . 11/2/2011
Wow, awesome story. Too awesome, actually... it prevented me from doing work. Ah well, great job. P
sekehowlka chapter 7 . 8/23/2011
I just re-read this story. God, how I loved every second of it 3
Kajskk chapter 7 . 1/4/2011
I like how you seem to focus a lot more on the Otome universe instead of Hime universe. Not that I don't like the Hime universe (considering my favourite characters are more the main characters there) but i think there's a nice touch to the Otome as well.

Start off with. You have no idea how confused I was when I now a couple of time been coming across the statement of "Shizuru and Anh Oneesama" Which ended up with me looking into this by watching Otomoe Zwei and now get what everyone talks about. Makes it easier to follow then. Anyway. With that said. I like your way to write. Usually I don't like the swap between 3 POV and 1 POV, but you managed. I think the reason it works is because you still have the third POV centred the same character that's in the same chapter is the first POV. Therefore it doesn't feel like a bad built castle about to fall because nothing keeps together. Nah, the fact that the first POVs are more of flashbacks of what was going on then helps as well. Over all I liked your style to write and doesn't seem to make everyone like oversexual beasts like a lot of other writers do. Even if we know some of them obviously were more perverted than others. Nope, you had a nice balance there. I remember thinking the same in on of your other fanfics as well.

Anyway. I'm a bit to tired to analyse everything. The story was cute yet not boring so I managed to read through without feeling that I need a break to continue or anything. Which is a good thing. And yeah... Keep the good writing up!

The Reviewer chapter 7 . 12/7/2010
Brilliant! Absolutely Brilliant. I read the entire thing from top to toe, unable to skip a single word. It is unusual to find a story so captivating, even when the interactions between Natsuki and Shizuru for half of it are through their disdain. You writing is incredible and you were true to the characters through the entire thing. It is most certainly more than worthy to be called the first fiction story to be completed about how Natsuki and Shizuru got together in the Otome universe.

Kudos. As a fellow writer and Shiznat fan, I applaud you!

/runs off to read the lemon in the Oneesama Sidestories
wolf chan chapter 7 . 11/20/2010
RAGN chapter 7 . 4/20/2010
Oh my gosh! This is so sweet! T.T ye this is I think the fist and best complete shiznat otome life story! Aw! Thank u so much!
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