Reviews for Bella
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
I like the story,and I think you're a good writer. You might want to change Bella a little bit though, at the moment she's a bit of a mary sue ( super powerful, righteous, mysterious, cute, larger than canon character) maybe downgrade her power level to normal, give her some flaws, ect.
Ironman 7 chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
crazymel2008 chapter 17 . 5/9/2013
i like your story and i think your a good writer and i hope you update i have to say

david boreanaz in a couple of interviews (old and resent)said that buffy will always be buffy's soul mate and will always love michelle gellar said the same thing and joss did as well.

Angel and Cordy:Angel never told Cordy that he loves loves her to her face or to any of their AI team?He might have shown he has some feeling for her like a crush but Buffy will always be his true he's with they will always be second even Cordy would be second best.I i dont' know if anyone notice that after Angel and Cordy "slept" together that at the end he said Buffy and doesnt that mean he was thinking she was Buffy the whole time.I feel bad for Cordy in the tv show Angel when he slept with Cordy they were useing some kinda spell "or whatever they did" to have his "perfect happyness" isnt that kinda cheating in away?In season 2 of Angel (In season 3 after Buffy died)he told Cordy (to her face)In all those years no one ever mattered. Not like she did. And now she's gone forever."thats the line at the end of the first episode in season3 of knew Buffy was his perfect happyness even said it to his should see the look on his face when she said that though i have no idea how she found Buffy the vampire slayer season 3 he told her "I saw you before you became the Slayer.I watched you, and I saw you called. It was a bright afternoon out in front of your school. You walked down the steps and I
loved even dreamed of marring Buffy in season 3 of no Angel wont ever love Cordy the way he loves Cordy but i do think you deserve someone nice and wont have you be in second place and you can do better than xander since that stupid guy cheated on you (xander you loser how can you do that to someone as pretty as cordy she's even prettier than willow and anya).Though i will admit if angel never met buffy he might have fell for boreanaz in a couple of interviews when they talk about the buffy and angel series(old and resent intervies)said that angel will always be buffy's soul mate and will always love michelle gellar said the same thing and joss did as the last episode in season two of Buffy the last or first to last episode she lived in LA before season 1 of Buffy before she meets him first in Sunnydell doesnt that make him kinda of a stalker?He even fell in love with her when she live in is Angel a stalker?in angel season 5 episode The Girl In Question when he found out buffy dating the importal he got all jealouse (spike to)he even said he had a couple of his men watch over buffy(he told spike and spike)here is the script even

About Buffy. How did you know she was in trouble?
I got word.
From who?
A source.
You've been spying on her?!
I just wanted to make sure she was all right.
Sending your lackeys to do your stalking for you. That is really pathetic.
All right, fine. I'm not proud of it, but it's... it's Buffy.
How many you got on her?
Uh, just the one. But he got spotted. Called me from the hospital after he regained consciousness.
You should've had more of your people watching her.
Yeah. We'll be landing soon.
(Spike sighs)
Remember the last time we were in Italy?
even after cordy dies (stupid joss how mean of you)angel forgot all about it her still sure he misses her though and even thinks about every now and if you can prove Angel with anyone else besides Buffy please pm my why they belong together.I will not send you hate mail. I just want to see different peoples reason just for fun. got the script from
Space-Case7029 chapter 14 . 5/2/2013
Just found this story two days ago and because of the number of chapters waited until today to read.

Loving the story. Bella's an interesting character. Hope that you continue, would love for Angel and Cordy to have a chance to really be together.

Hated that on the show, when he got enough nerve to admit how he felt, they took Cordelia away from the gang. Haven't watched the last season all the way yet, but need to.

Looking forward to more. Audra
twilightjazz chapter 11 . 2/7/2013
love it please update soon
BlackWolfDrappa chapter 3 . 5/21/2009
OMG! I love this story!
Angel JJK chapter 9 . 3/12/2009
Love this story! Love the relationships with Bella!
Persephone Summerwick chapter 9 . 7/18/2008
Oh my god! I LOVE this story! Update soon PLEASE! And please bring Cordy back to life
LadyKryptonite294 chapter 5 . 4/21/2008
That was a gr8 chapter, soz it has taken me so long have been on holiday LOL

YAY Bella has a friend now, gd for her, hope hse has fun wi her _

Cee xx
rnl1993 chapter 5 . 4/6/2008
great chapter and awesome story I love it! It is so great and the characters are well writtern please update soon I can't wait.
rnl1993 chapter 2 . 4/6/2008
aw i love nice and caring spikey so cute.
rnl1993 chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
aw thats so cute well not the mangled bodies but the way she acts towards spike. So cute love the story.
LadyKryptonite294 chapter 4 . 3/18/2008
Well juz finished chap 4, still luvin it hehe

So sweet between Bella and Illyria, but i not sure i will b able to get ova u changing her hair...i know the idea was to get her to not look like fred but i luved fred and i feel that she is gone for good now :(

Soz other than my emotional response hehe i thought it was gr8!Can't wait to see what the others say bout her appearance especially Wesley _ Cee xx
LadyKryptonite294 chapter 3 . 3/12/2008
Juz read chap 3 and luved it :D

Bella has definately got them rapped round her lil finger LOL

Spike is still gr8 though and i luv Illyria can't wait to read bout them going shoppin hehe Keep it up :D
LadyKryptonite294 chapter 2 . 3/6/2008
Aw...SPike can be so sweet at times :D

But poor Bella u reli av given her a bad life LOL i hope Spike can protect her :D

Gr8 jub keep it up and please update soon :D
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