Reviews for He Hated Her
timid madam red chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
beautiful cake ... but we will never know the name of this "lady of wild sex" Tim?

but above all there will never be again?
AlexisPryce chapter 4 . 9/30/2009
I. Love. This. Story.

You're a genius. 3
ksevfand chapter 4 . 3/28/2009
I think you should write more on this...just a few more chapters? Please?
ksevfansd chapter 4 . 2/5/2009
More? Please? or I can ask forcefully...
ksevfansd chapter 2 . 2/5/2009
I really like your story. I would love to see McGee get angry and just let go...Can't wait to read more.
jennisashark chapter 4 . 12/13/2008
Wow.

Just wow...

Can't wait for my turn in the bathroom-i'm gonna need to take a cold shower myself...
mike chapter 4 . 12/7/2008
you need a few more chapters

she thinks tim is going back to the nice guy, it would be funny if she goes out to dinner with him just to tease him, and he shows her how much of a bad boy he can be.
Token chapter 4 . 5/29/2008
Fantastic! I'm usually not a fan of OTC, but you rocked this!
M E Wofford chapter 4 . 5/4/2008
I hope you don't mind. I came in at the end of the story and am reviewing all chapters through this last one.

Good story.

And perhaps explains a lot of female/male interactions that I see everyday.

I thought the sex scenes were very well done, ahem...

Just a plain old good story.

She needs to go to the FBI and work on Fornell.
CSI3Lyra chapter 4 . 4/10/2008
Wow, very angsty! I really like the idea, and I like the fact she isn't named, or given any real personality or backstory. I do have one bone to pick... Surely two intelligent NCIS agents wouldn't have sex without condoms?
Smackalicious chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
Oh man, this is great! LOL, you know I would say that. I like my porn. :p I know you said it was an OFC, but I have this sexy idea in my head that it was Ziva when she first started at NCIS. Ooh. I can see the two of them having angry sex. Okay. I'll just leave that to my own imagination. Heh. Love it!
Paragon Dragon chapter 4 . 3/8/2008
This was one of the weirdest, funniest stories I've ever read. I absolutely loved it.
Sorgina chapter 3 . 3/6/2008
Wow! what a pair!
Sorgina chapter 2 . 3/6/2008
got the ice box ready for the next steamy chapter :-))
elflordsmistress chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
it's here too

YAY!

xx
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