Reviews for He Hated Her
Buddy5647 chapter 4 . 12/1/2015
He had it all figured out and then went and offered to TALK?,?! Did he just want an end to it, or just being naive and stupid again?
Buddy5647 chapter 3 . 12/1/2015
"Process what had happened" great writing, so typical.
Buddy5647 chapter 2 . 12/1/2015
Nice job changingPOV entertaining to know what goes on in her head. Shouldn't be a problem for her to get mad Mc back.
Buddy5647 chapter 1 . 12/1/2015
Angry sex might just be what it would take for him to quit being so timid in his relationships. "Oh, Ziva couldn't feel the same..." "Never gonna tell ..." Ad nauseum. Really refreshing.
timid madam red chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
beautiful cake ... but we will never know the name of this "lady of wild sex" Tim?

but above all there will never be again?
dassala chapter 4 . 9/30/2009
I. Love. This. Story.

You're a genius. 3
ksevfand chapter 4 . 3/28/2009
I think you should write more on this...just a few more chapters? Please?
ksevfansd chapter 4 . 2/5/2009
More? Please? or I can ask forcefully...
ksevfansd chapter 2 . 2/5/2009
I really like your story. I would love to see McGee get angry and just let go...Can't wait to read more.
jennisashark chapter 4 . 12/13/2008

Just wow...

Can't wait for my turn in the bathroom-i'm gonna need to take a cold shower myself...
mike chapter 4 . 12/7/2008
you need a few more chapters

she thinks tim is going back to the nice guy, it would be funny if she goes out to dinner with him just to tease him, and he shows her how much of a bad boy he can be.
Token chapter 4 . 5/29/2008
Fantastic! I'm usually not a fan of OTC, but you rocked this!
M E Wofford chapter 4 . 5/4/2008
I hope you don't mind. I came in at the end of the story and am reviewing all chapters through this last one.

Good story.

And perhaps explains a lot of female/male interactions that I see everyday.

I thought the sex scenes were very well done, ahem...

Just a plain old good story.

She needs to go to the FBI and work on Fornell.
CSI3Lyra chapter 4 . 4/10/2008
Wow, very angsty! I really like the idea, and I like the fact she isn't named, or given any real personality or backstory. I do have one bone to pick... Surely two intelligent NCIS agents wouldn't have sex without condoms?
Smackalicious chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
Oh man, this is great! LOL, you know I would say that. I like my porn. :p I know you said it was an OFC, but I have this sexy idea in my head that it was Ziva when she first started at NCIS. Ooh. I can see the two of them having angry sex. Okay. I'll just leave that to my own imagination. Heh. Love it!
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