Reviews for Totality
LoveEqualsEDWARD chapter 4 . 9/5/2008
Very nicely done (as usual)!
LoveEqualsEDWARD chapter 3 . 9/5/2008
Wait a minute...Stephenie Meyer, is that you?

Too good. You're quickly becoming my fave on FanFic. :)
LoveEqualsEDWARD chapter 2 . 9/5/2008
Me likey! RAWR! :P
LoveEqualsEDWARD chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
LOVE IT! Especially how you tastefully captured Edward's carnal desire for Bella. I could totally picture the entire scene in my head, as if I was watching it on a tv screen. Excellent job!
Aurabee chapter 4 . 8/20/2008
You write him so beautifully. I love the perspective of being in his head for a change and every choice you make, from individual words to emphatic style, rings true. I'm so delighted to have found your page here!
wishimight chapter 2 . 8/20/2008
"Every single point where our bodies touched was steaming as her fire touched my ice."

My absolute favorite line.
rmcrms5 chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
i like your story
Mystery1894 chapter 2 . 7/30/2008

Love it! Keep going! I wanna hear what Edward thinks on the page where Bella makes her request. -

That sounds perverted I know but you know what I mean. Not like that
Mystery1894 chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
Wow. Edward really likes Jacob doesn't he? With all these pools of blood and broken carcasses
CTYME1000 chapter 4 . 7/27/2008
wow this enitre series was amazing. i can't even imagine how SM would write it
angelbattle chapter 2 . 7/27/2008
if you love would love mines

well...what can i say? the lust here is so weell described...i can almost feel it...jejeje

-i really enjoyed this chapter...its more smutty than the first one...but in a good way! you really got the way of thinking from edward..and it looked "real". Excelent
Sohmakid chapter 4 . 7/20/2008
Sohmakid chapter 2 . 7/20/2008
Amazing job! Love it!
Sohmakid chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
OliviaJane chapter 4 . 7/13/2008
Great job.
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