|Reviews for Totality|
| Aurabee chapter 4 . 8/20/2008
You write him so beautifully. I love the perspective of being in his head for a change and every choice you make, from individual words to emphatic style, rings true. I'm so delighted to have found your page here!
| wishimight chapter 2 . 8/20/2008
"Every single point where our bodies touched was steaming as her fire touched my ice."
My absolute favorite line.
| rmcrms5 chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
i like your story
| Mystery1894 chapter 2 . 7/30/2008
Love it! Keep going! I wanna hear what Edward thinks on the page where Bella makes her request. -
That sounds perverted I know but you know what I mean. Not like that
| Mystery1894 chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
Wow. Edward really likes Jacob doesn't he? With all these pools of blood and broken carcasses
| CTYME1000 chapter 4 . 7/27/2008
wow this enitre series was amazing. i can't even imagine how SM would write it
| angelbattle chapter 2 . 7/27/2008
if you love comments..you would love mines
well...what can i say? the lust here is so weell described...i can almost feel it...jejeje
-i really enjoyed this chapter...its more smutty than the first one...but in a good way! you really got the way of thinking from edward..and it looked "real". Excelent
| Sohmakid chapter 4 . 7/20/2008
| Sohmakid chapter 2 . 7/20/2008
Amazing job! Love it!
| Sohmakid chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
| OliviaJane chapter 4 . 7/13/2008
| angelbabe17mm chapter 4 . 6/30/2008
absolutely an incredible story.
| 123iluvzac chapter 4 . 6/27/2008
LOVE. IT. :D r u gonna add more chapters?
Jellybean the Cow
| SleathyNinja chapter 4 . 6/26/2008
that was amazing!
| topazandteapots chapter 4 . 6/5/2008
I loved the story!
And it made my friend (the Jacob-lover) admit that maybe Edward was okay.
Even the Edward hating Jacob parts.