Reviews for Totality
angelbattle chapter 2 . 7/27/2008
if you love comments..you would love mines

well...what can i say? the lust here is so weell described...i can almost feel it...jejeje

-i really enjoyed this chapter...its more smutty than the first one...but in a good way! you really got the way of thinking from edward..and it looked "real". Excelent
Sohmakid chapter 4 . 7/20/2008
Adorable!
Sohmakid chapter 2 . 7/20/2008
Amazing job! Love it!
Sohmakid chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
AMAZING!
OliviaJane chapter 4 . 7/13/2008
Great job.
angelbabe17mm chapter 4 . 6/30/2008
absolutely an incredible story.
123iluvzac chapter 4 . 6/27/2008
LOVE. IT. :D r u gonna add more chapters?

Jellybean the Cow
SleathyNinja chapter 4 . 6/26/2008
that was amazing!
topazandteapots chapter 4 . 6/5/2008
I loved the story!

And it made my friend (the Jacob-lover) admit that maybe Edward was okay.

Even the Edward hating Jacob parts.

-Sarah
Gershwhen chapter 3 . 6/4/2008
Since I'm no part of Team Jacob, I adored this. I like seeing Edward's viewpoint and his love for Bella. (He's so much better for her than Jake is!)

Thanks for this delightful scene.
melaniemma chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
You write Edward so beautifully, his words and thoughts are perfectly in tune with how I feel that he would speak and think. Thankyou for giving me my Edward fix! Keep it up :)
dancing.rox464 chapter 4 . 5/20/2008
That. Was. Amazing.

Definitly the BEST story from Edward's POV I have read (not including Midnight Sun lol).

I can't choose just one thing I like about this story, I love it all.
twilightened chapter 4 . 5/17/2008
You write Edward so beautifully. I cannot wait for you to add more chapters to this story.
runaway xo chapter 4 . 5/14/2008
Unbelieveably beautiful. Amazing job :)
harem chapter 4 . 5/13/2008
I can't get enough of your stories tonight. I'm gonna need a favorites list for your stories alone!
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