Reviews for Promise Me Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Okay so I love your story. Always have, always will. But I was just rereading it and I thought could the fact that Draco's girlfriend's name is Stephanie have anything to do with Stephanie Meyer? It could be a coincidence but I was just wondering |
![]() ![]() Loved your story! Just one tinsy winsy niggling point that kinda annoyed me? It was when they went to Walmart? There are none in Britain at all, and I mean at all. Maybe change it to a British multi-purpose supermarket? Like Morrisons or Tesco? And black Friday isn't that big an event as it is in America either. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved every part of the story, especially when Hermione took the Malfoy's to an amusement park and the zoo. Lucius became my favorite when he brought Bob home. You did a great job writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I. COULD. NOT. STOP. LAUGHING! Everything was so funny. Especially the animal scene. You have no idea how much I laughed! I was almost crying! FANTASTIC JOB! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really great fic |
![]() ![]() This is one of the FUNNIEST chapters I have ever read. I love this story SO much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was SO good. I just died reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed reading this story. Draco and Hermione will always be together in my mind no matter the end of DH. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a great story. Thank you ever so much! I loved it oh and Loulou... bwahahaha! Lucius and Narcissa were just darling. I thoroughly enjoyed this. |
![]() ![]() why does it have to end :'( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I went into to this thinking this was a dumb plot till I read the first few chapters and I became hooked! This was actually a good story and I cannot wait to read more from you. |
![]() ![]() I'm finding your story amusing but... big BUT... why did you take a story that is quintessentially set in Britain, then introduce all the North American crap? We have supermarkets (it's not the developing world over here) and amusement parks. Nowadays, we even have that ghastly American import, Black Friday, though back when you wrote this it hadn't really become a thing. But the point is, we do have sales in shops (usually Boxing Day - 26 Dec), where people behave like idiots in shops. My point being, that with a little bit of effort you could easily have set this story more authentically in it's proper environment. I realise that, as the author, you can create your own universe, but it really doesn't make sense to use JKR's characters and creations so out of context as it rather loses the point. Ah well.. hope your writing has matured since you uploaded this otherwise good tale. |
![]() ![]() ![]() When I started reading it.. I just wanted something that can keep up my attention. And it did just that! Absolutely loved the work...specially your OOC Lucius and Narsisa.! Good luck! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing story! just loved it! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was simply bloody amazingabsolutely loved it 33 |