Wow... simply wow... luv it... keep going hon... :-)

I feel kind of bad for Stephanie right now... she sounds dumb, but she doesn't deserve to be cheated on!

Oh wow, I didn't realize this was so soon after Hogwarts! Them being 19 makes this story's mood make a lot more sense...

Lol, they're like children! So cute :)

Hmmm. I'm curious about what kind of girlfriend of Draco's would allow this to go on...

Yay! The wager begins!

god, I love this story

Absolutely incredible

yassss Canadians uniteeeee

That's cute :)

Ooooooooooooverall...With this being at least my second (and maybe my 3rd) time reading it...

I'm really surprised that you wrote this so young. I read your bio. But you can definitely tell that you were young.

A few small things, that if I were going to go back and re-think the story: I think that Hermione never really tried to be as obnoxious as she ought to have been. I think that not Googling the British version of Walmart was kind of a cop-out (it's ASDA, btw). I would have also liked the epilogue to have been an expansion of Draco's daydream from Chapter 25. Also, you know this, but heavy editing could happen grammatically, particularly from Chapter 25-ish.

Finally, I would take out the last 3 chapters. I don't know about Hermione going to school as a plot device. Clearly, that's why she needs the money, but in the epilogue, it becomes obvious that Hermione isn't going to be pursuing her medical career. "Just you and me from now on." Seriously? What was the point of her going to the school? You could, theoretically, just make the need for money something else. Like, if S.P.E.W. were her full-time job and it was dying.

I love funny, light-hearted romance, I do. So I can appreciate that in this. I love the concept. You are a funny writer. I was wiping tears from my eyes reading this again last night. I hope you're still working on revisions. I don't want to discredit, I just would like to see something I enjoyed made a bit better.

Congratulations on a successful work!

I just...Feel like Steph's little statement was unnecessary. After all that Dramione went through...And then for Hermione to just BELIEVE Steph over Draco. I know she's not supposed to be thinking rationally, but after a pretty great love scene (which I know you said you had a hard time writing, but honestly I, at one point, thought, "Wow. How effortless this must be for her! It seems to natural!") I just don't think these additional chapters are necessary. And, frankly, they are difficult to get through since it's actually this part of the story that seems forced. It's very much like you didn't want to give up the story, so you created a scenario to make it last further. And I have a feeling that the next 5 chapters are not going to be the light-hearted, lovey-dovey fun that we've come to expect from the past 30 chapters.

So...It was 5,000 galleons. And there have been a few more grammatical and plothole errors over the last couple of chapters.

Just...For when you get to this editing part.

Hi! Im a fan of your fanfic! I have always look for dramiones and they haven really atracted me... But your really did! Im looking forward for another of your fics!

I feel so bad for Stephanie, but... I can't help but think this whole chapter was beautiful!