Reviews for Into the Void
EdeatheDemonFox chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Awwwww, so sad! ;; Words can't even convey how sad that made me! But yet at the same time, beautifully written! You're amazing!
AsianTwinkiesFTW chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Alright now you HAVE to write a Demyx & Axel twin fic. Do it. Please. fjkdafjsdkjfasdl;fjdksjkfjdaskfjdaskl

Poor Roxy ;~;

Zemby chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
So touching, and I loved imagining this story. Thanks for writing it, and thanks to Ocean for suggesting the idea~
Ice Princezz chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
It's cute but sad I like it
XWhiteRabbitX chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
I'm crying. It was so sad! but SO good.
PopcornObsessed-DragonLuver chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Oh My God ... This is why I hate character death fics ... my little sisters make fun of me when I cry ...
Llawlietzz chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Gawd, if you got them to come back as twins I wouldn't know whether to laugh or cry... you're an amazing author :P
AkuDemyfan chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
This was so sad. I really cried with this.

You know, you could write down a story where the two of them are twins. That would be so cool! Had had that thought for a long while (even before I red this piece of story or the one in DeviantArt). As far as I can see there's just three (me, you and the one at DeviantArt) who has ever come up with the idea of Axel and Demyx being real brothers. Might write the idea down someday. ;)
Ocean's Nocturne of the COCA chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
Yay, you published it! I really like the ending. It's so sweet!


I can't resist...

"Must...go...towards...the light!"


I'm done.

FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
Well, I succeeded in my mission not to cry. Barely, but I did...I don't know if that makes me feel better or worse. I was so...touched, you could say, by this. I think it's the only time in one of your stories that I've really seen them all with emotion and bonds to one another. It was sad, yes, but one of your best pieces. I really loved how Zexion stooped so low (not really, but I had no better way to say it) as to say his real name. That in itself tells me more than any pain and tears from the characters really could...I feel the worst for Roxas, though. Between this and what we actually saw in Into the Nexus, I think he's suffered enough pain now to match Demyx's tally with you. Sort of a bittersweet ending, but aren't these types of fic always like that? I really can't generalize, though, because this is the best friend's deathfic I've seen in...ever. Really, I'm not just saying that because I'm incapable of anything but sickening compliments. You deserve them all. My favorite part was how Demyx was the connecting link that provided them all with a friend-him-even Zexion. Great job!
Maple Story of Anime of COCA chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
This was really good! I'm not the overly angsty one (that's Ocean's job), but i found it touching how Roxas actually tried to let go...i mean, most nobodys would yelling and stuff and looking for ways to help whoever, but this put a new spin on the whole death experience!

...and now, i guess i have to go read 'Into the Nexus'
Evil Genius of the COCA chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
WAH! *sniff* Stuff like that, where someone from the afterlife has to say their goodbye, and especially when the median is dying too... it makes me wanna cry! Poor Roxas got left behind! Although...technically, since they were still in the Nexus, they would come back... but seeing as this was before all that happened, it doesn't really count... and you are the author, you do have creative liscense. :D And the last part made me smile (while holding back tears mind you). It was so sweet, how Demyx and Axel are gonna come back as twins and everything... so sad, but so happy...

kitsuneluvuh chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
okay... but they're still in the Nexus so they'd both come back, right? What a sad goodbye... Poor Roxas... *cries*
SunflowerWielder chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
Aww... So sad but also sweet at the same time. Brillient as usual.
aCiD bLaCk ChErRy chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
This story is so good. But he REALLY took long to die. Well, that's good. I like the way you pictured death, and the light we see at the end. Good work
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