Reviews for Heaven Help You
Jazz E. Roisin chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
From what I read the angst was well placed. This was a well written stress situation. You got into James' head and showed what he would truely feel.

And from what I pieced together Voldemort attacked James' parents' house where he and Lily were staying. Causing Remus to come to their aid. And Lily was being raped by a Death Eater.

This was a very powerful scene. You also play on the subject of doubt in this piece and it makes it much stronger especially since the wager between him being brave or him reaminig hostage is the life of those he loves.

Kudos.
webling-girl05 chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
yes, really angsty but really good. very deep. i like it a lot.