|Reviews for I Can't See Your Face In My Mind|
| snappleducated chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
Gorgerous and tragic, I loved it.
| Faye Silo chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
it was so wonderful.
| A Shining Armour chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Interesting piece. The imagery was really well thought out, as were each of the character's psyches. Particularly, I really liked Dalan in this - I thought you captured him well.
However, I had trouble following this piece. I feel like you changed "voices" at random (yet frequently), making it disconcerted. I understand that maybe that was what you were going for, but I do think that even the most jagged writing has to have SOME flow, and I feel like that was lacking in this piece.
Again, still really well written, but I think the over all *structure* of this piece maybe marred it. That's the only criticism I've got though. Personally, I was a big fan of the whole Reks/Basch/Vaan scandal, and disappointed that Square didn't play that up more. Can you say, DRAMA? xD
Anyways, nicely done, and good luck with future writings!
| anonymous chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
Amazing, beuatiful imagery.
| duskshard chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
Poor, poor Reks...
| Fragile Tension chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
This is sad and makes me want to replay the beginning of this game again. Sorry for such a short review. :)