|Reviews for Heavy|
| Kina Kalamari chapter 11 . 4/19/2012
Um... Well, you said you wouldn't abandon this fic, but it hasn't been updated in almost four years, so...
Anyway, I really liked it. There were numerous spelling and grammar errors, but they were all minor things. It didn't detract from the story, and it's nothing a decent beta couldn't clear up pretty easily. The only ones that were actually a problem were the couple of spots where you actually seemed to be missing words.
I thought that you kept them all in character quite well. Obviously the super-sappy moments weren't particularly Ed-like, but it was all in the name of fluff, and you didn't lose his character entirely during those bits.
I'm really very sad that there's not more of this story. Oh well. If you ever decide to update it again, I'll read it. ]
| TheMistOfThePast chapter 11 . 1/13/2012
omg! please please update this story! its soooooo good!
| Hellocloser chapter 11 . 3/11/2011
Please tell me you haven't dropped this story . a
| Angel21217 chapter 11 . 8/21/2010
AWWW, update soon please!
| rikku92 chapter 11 . 9/27/2008
le gasp! please update, this is such an adorable story!
| Scarletpan chapter 11 . 9/16/2008
Very good! I love when you get the characters into conflict. As sad as that may sound. But you do such a great job of showing their emotions when they are angry! I only hope no argument like this will fall upon me, you're almost to good at it. LOL
| PropehcyGirlSBN chapter 11 . 7/28/2008
I like it. Update soon.
| CrimsonCobwebs chapter 11 . 7/7/2008
loved that little standoff! Wonderfully executed! More please ;)
| CrimsonCobwebs chapter 6 . 7/7/2008
heehee, Ed the Hairdresser and now Ed the Cook? This keeps getting better lol
| CrimsonCobwebs chapter 3 . 7/7/2008
Me likey n_n How can they argue at a time like that? lol. They're ust hopeless hehe!
Just one tidbit: 'Go put a sheet & blanket on the couch' Try and avoid that '&'.
Oh, I also liked it when he had to change the end of his sentence from 'covered in someone elses blood' to 'thing'. lol.
| CrimsonCobwebs chapter 2 . 7/7/2008
lol. But seriously, Ed and Al are characterised well and the detail you put into your work allows to clearly visualise everything that's happening!
| CrimsonCobwebs chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
0_0 oh noes! Winry!
I'e just started reading FMA fanfics (even though I've been reading the manga forever) and saw your fic recommended in 'Warmth of my memories' (or something like that) so thought I'd check it out coz I love WinEd! n_n
Anyway, it's brilliantly written and balances description with actual narration very well. I will continue _
| chasingfireflies chapter 11 . 6/14/2008
...i started into the FMA fanfiction today.
and now i hafta clean my room...
'Twas a good read.
And, yes, the conflict was slightly unexpected.
| PrincessOfHeartsNYP chapter 11 . 6/10/2008
Wow you had to add in some plot! Better not have Winry hanging herself again... STICK WITH THE FLUFF!_
| Took-Baggins chapter 11 . 6/7/2008
oh no! i could have sworn that i already reviewed this chapter! i guess not, though. sorry about the lateness!
i love the fighting with Ed and Winry. it started out as their usual banter but it started to get pretty serious there, didn't it? looks like she's struck a nerve with Ed and he's not entirely sure how to answer it (Edward? speechless! never thought i'd see that!)
i love this chapter, even there wasn't really any fluff, it's still awesome!