Reviews for In Plain Sight
Dawn D chapter 17 . 1/24/2010
I just recently found were I had started reading this story. I'm so happy I did to be able to finish it. It was great. But I was curious to where they ended up location wise.
Lrwright09 chapter 17 . 6/18/2009
I finally finished this story. It is definitely one of my top 10 stories. I originally started reading at RTN, but lost track of it. I am so glad I found it here. I missed it so much. You are such a good writer. I absolutely enjoy the detail and the imagery. I loved the ending and I am imagining Jake and Elise living happily ever after.
Number1GHfan chapter 17 . 2/15/2009
OMG LOVE IT!

I am soo sad that this fic is over :'( but I love how u ended it!

Great Job on this fic, it's one of my favs!
pwrmom2 chapter 17 . 2/13/2009
Charlynn,

Fabulous! I loved your ending. I love that Agent Maloy figured out that the explosion was a trap and that he knows that the Morgan's are out there somewhere and he helped keep up their ruse so they can have peace. I also love how the baby looks like the real Liz and Jason not the new personalities. So funny Liz teasing "Jake" about looking like Jason. Best of all was the tribute you gave to Evelyn with Aveline's name, so great and my assumption is that they were sending the announcements to their friends in Dovetree to let them know about the baby. You did such a great job with this story. I loved it from beginning to end.
LizzieVee chapter 17 . 2/13/2009
This was the most wonderful story I have ever read. Thank you so much for writing it!
Vonnie chapter 17 . 2/12/2009
I wish this could have lasted just a little bit longer, but I liked how you ended. It was good. Cocky Sonny knew that there was a possibility that he could end up dead and wore a bullet proof vest. Cocky bastard laughed his head off while others were dieing. I'm glad someone made sure that he was in fact dead. I'm glad that Bill Maloney didn't end up dead and that he was okay. That was a cute unique name for the baby. I never would've guessed what they were going to name their baby. I loved when Jason had "porn hair" as everyone was calling it, but not that long. LOL That was a classic lasting image of him so he couldn't be recongized. I'm glad that Jason and Elizabeth changed their names to something better than what the FBI gave them.

Overall this was a good fic and I hope to read more of your Liason stories. Please don't ever stop. Keep up the good work. :)
BrownieHartz chapter 17 . 2/12/2009
It's over :( That is very sad! I loved this fic :) And I bet I know where a few of those announcements are headed. In my mind though, Jason Liz wait for things to die down a little and they let go of the green eyes and her short hair. Back to the natural beauties they are :) LOL does that make sense?

Thanks for taking me on this journey, I look forward to the next one!
pinklady34 chapter 17 . 2/12/2009
i am sad to see this story go but i liked how it ended. but carly will always be carly...she is just so predictable. i love how lorenzo is smart in your story that he will not go after her, i believe he went wrong on the show when he went after her in the first place. he was always very smart and strong character. i love my liason couple but i wished i would have read more of them as being a new family, but maybe in another one of your beautiful stories.
babeboo1968 chapter 17 . 2/12/2009
Thnaks for a great ending to a great story!
jaceyb1 chapter 17 . 2/12/2009
I am sorry to see this story end but I loved every chapter. It was amazing to see them go from awkward and fighting to loving each other with all they had. I hope you have another story in mind because you are a wonderful writer.
Desjardine07 chapter 17 . 2/11/2009
When I last reviewed you replied by saying that I might not like the way you ended this story but, I have to say it was absolutely marvelous. I have read many stories that have upset me especially when they make Emily hate Liz but this was not one of them. All parts of this story interested me. I just ask that you update "Safe...No More" as soon as you can and start streching those creative muscels and start writing a new story. :D I loved it!
jerannagail chapter 17 . 2/11/2009
Absolutely wonderful! I can picture the entire thing in my head, Sonny lighting his cigar and then the eruption of gunfire. Carly in the park getting all angry as Lorenzo approaches her with a tidbit of advice. And mostly Jason and Elizabeth with their newborn daughter and their new looks, joking around and looking at one another with that familiar love and respect that they hold only for each other. Amazing ending to a phenomenal story. I cannot wait to see what you come up with next. Thank you for such a fantastic read.
eyesonu chapter 17 . 2/11/2009
I really loved this story, you actually had me in tears at the end.(happy of course:)) The two of them really are meant for each other. Thankyou for such a fabulous story.
Pamela Hedstrom chapter 17 . 2/11/2009
I hate to see it go- it was one of my most favorite-you did a fantastic job of wrapping everything up.

thanks
leasmom chapter 17 . 2/11/2009
A great ending even for Sonny. Love colored contacts, don't like the beard though, a shame to hide that face
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