Reviews for The Secret
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19
Oohh, dark. :3 niiiiiiiiiiice
Kyndsie chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Hmmm... I hope he didn't kill her, from both a fangirl and a story-telling perspective. You've established a very dark Jareth in such a brief passage - very impressive, btw - and he needs to control. If she's dead, he has no opportunity for further control.

I rather think that he'd prefer to continue to torture her. Yikes!
Cutiecat chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
Creepy! It sends chills up my spine...My gosh, you made Jareth all creepy-stalker-murderer-ishly scary!
NS chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
Ooh, madness! Cool!
MythStar Black Dragon chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
Scary jareth

Maria
FireShifter chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
I like it-but please, please don't let Sarah be killed! I just don't like when Sarah gets killed. Come to think of it, I don't like unhappy dark or sad endings either, but you're the author. :)
ScarletArtist chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
Wow hun - this was very, very dark! Well written tho!
notwritten chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
This is a fine, and good one-shot. Have a good weekend. Keep smiling, and posting. :-)
flamethrowerqueen chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
*whistles* Yes, wow, quite a dark little thing. Very lovely, though, and I thought it was nicely in character. _