Reviews for Blue Eyed Sayian: One choice One Path
HISTORY83 chapter 17 . 5/26/2013
Cette histoire est vraiment géniale !
Je vous mets d'office dans mes auteur favori :-)
Si je peux me permettre : Que sont devenus Yamcha et Sami ?
Très bonnes idées :-)
HISTORY 83
RealTalk chapter 17 . 12/5/2012
i like it but what happened to Yamcha and their other sister Beth, its like you cut them off completely, i still like it just wondering what happen to Vegeta's other siblings...
Guest chapter 17 . 12/1/2012
maybe i read too fast but weren't they ten when this was all taking place?
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
I love all of your stories :) their great. Keep it up
sweetgilda chapter 17 . 11/17/2011
I loved your story, I really like alternate universes, I'll add to favorites, greetings
Lavonya chapter 17 . 9/12/2011
this is great!

i love it!
betty69blue chapter 17 . 11/27/2010
great story! i love stories about bulma being a saiyan an shes strong! def one of my favs!
T'Mu-Yor chapter 17 . 10/15/2008
... the concept is a good one... but I find many flaws... 1st the time table... you say she is 5 when this starts... than she goes to vegeta-sei at 10 (5 years later) some time (weeks and days are referenced so I would say a few months... 6-8 at the most is my guess) 11 than a year later she's kidnapped at 12 and she's mated 12-13 and prego at 13-14(at the oldest?)

You might want to do a quick edit and change time frames... maybe make chapter 3 read 10 years later or something of the sort... maybe 12 where she ends up being nearly 18 when they mate. I know that different cultures have people getting married young but it is very hard for a girl to get pregnant if she hasn't even had her 1st period. Most girls don't get their period until 12-13 and this is pushing it sometimes. Most of my friends got theirs between 14-15 though some early bloomers got theirs at 12...

I'm not harping but this is just something you really want to watch when you are writing a story where someone gets pregnant...

Reference:

Chap 2

"pushed the large door open with her five-year-old"

Chap 3

Five years later….
SabaKun chapter 7 . 8/5/2008
Lol my favorite part of this chapter was your review of it. XD Very cute ;3
Musette Fujiwara chapter 17 . 7/23/2008
So cute the end you gave to the story...
demondeansgirl666 chapter 16 . 7/20/2008
awesome good good good update soon
demondeansgirl666 chapter 15 . 7/20/2008
cute...update soon
demondeansgirl666 chapter 14 . 7/19/2008
it's getting better updae soon
Vampweresaiyan chapter 13 . 5/22/2008
Yeah,you finally updated! It felt like forever since u did.I love this fic and I hate that 'thing' whats her name again...well whatever is.

P.S

Hope you update soon

Vamp.
Musette Fujiwara chapter 13 . 5/21/2008
wow...

awesome...

so now everyone is in deep trouble...

I wonder who will survive the best...
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