|Reviews for Waited|
| Mr. me chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
I think the story is really good till Mokuba showed up in the kitchen
| Nightmother chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Really cute, though a few grammar errors..well i think they're grammar. Anyway you had some of the speech lines on the same line when it was two different speakers.
like for example:
"I saw you...kissing Yami. Earlier." Mokuba laughed, poking Bakura slightly. "You silly! We were playing Truth or Dare. Marik dared me to kiss him. I only love you, Kura!"
It was all one line, where Mokuba's line should have been on a new line. It helps space things out, and makes it easier to tell when a new speaker appears.
| TheMasterOfYourFate chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
That was awesome! Umm you speeled Naive wrong,but other then that(and some Uncapitalized I's) it frigging awesome! Hehe
| DemonKittyAngel chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
well... I like mokuba but bakura's just a little to ooc for me.
| minko chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Ohh my! This was fun and wonderful... Dexterlove... Though I've only gotten to see a small bit of it... *Squee*... Gah... I /So/ want to roleplay this pairing sometime... lol... Anyway great job! .
| Journey Maker chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
I really liked this story.. It shows that true love still exists..
| dragonlady222 chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
I felt so bad for Bakura. I'm glad that Mokuba did wait. Bakura feels deeply and steadily and is true to his heart.